Udain Tomar - Game/Level Designer

[u1286]

Hi Everyone ,

 

I am studying in Supinfogame, Pune and I am in the last year of my college.

 

I am re-working on my portfolio and it is still under construction. I am a bit confused about the colors, fonts and the number of projects (lol, actually about everything).

 

I am thinking of removing around 2-4 projects. But in each I feel that there is something important to show in my portfolio.

 

I am also attaching my CV. You can see the 9 most important projects on it.

 

It would be great if you people could give me some feedback on my CV and portfolio. 

 

http://udaintomar.wix.com/portfolio

 

# Right now I am looking for an Internship for 6 months during the summer of 2015 #

[u1286]

I have updated the portfolio and the CV.

 

If anyone could please give some feedback, it would be great.

 

http://udaintomar.wix.com/portfolio

 

Cheers.

[Vilham]

CV - professional experience and projects at the top, then education, then skills, remove objectives tbh.

[u1286]

Thanks Will. I will soon update my CV and post it here. Till then any comments on my portfolio?

http://udaintomar.wix.com/portfolio

[u1286]

i have updated my CV along with a few changes in the portfolio. Please let me know your feedback for both the things. Thanks.

 

http://udaintomar.wix.com/portfolio#!resume/c46c

 

And I dont know why but the resume is much clearer in Photoshop or even if i save it in jpeg on my computer it is very clear. But when I upload it on Wix, all the text seems to have a bad outline around them.

 

Does anyone have an idea why this is happening? I tried changing the resolution, it solves the issue but then the image size drastically increases and obviously proportionally slows down the loading speed.

[FMPONE]

bump

[Vilham]

CV is definately better, focuses on your actual work and projects.

[u1286]

I have again made a few changes to my portfolio.

 

If you all get some time please check it out, and let me know what you think about it.

 

I had one more question does the portfolio feel like it is filled with unnecessary projects and too much detail?

 

http://udaintomar.wix.com/portfolio

 

Thanks once again

[FrieChamp]

 

I had one more question does the portfolio feel like it is filled with unnecessary projects and too much detail?

 

 

Definitely. I feel like it's a little cluttered and I'm overwhelmed by the amount of projects. Removing old and/or small projects and/or categorizing by your role would help. I see you've got projects listed on your resume that lasted one or five days. I know you're trying to list as much experience as possible, but it might be hurting you in the end.

[u1286]

Thank You Friedrich. I am thinking of removing Tiger Park, Necrophobia, Tower Attack, Game of Gods E-Boardgame, Tale of Two Worlds, Freedom is a Lie. This totals to 6. Maybe I will add one new project and if Tale of Two Worlds gets updated then I wont remove it. So lets say I will remove 4 projects. So from 13 I will come down to 9. Is it ok? And I am confused as to which projects should I remove and which to keep.

 

After this I hope my About Me page is not overcrowded.

 

http://udaintomar.wix.com/portfolio#!about-me/c8h6

 

And the College Assignments page also, I am confused about number of projects under it.

 

http://udaintomar.wix.com/portfolio#!other-projects/c12b3

 

Otherwise how is the portfolio, colors, required info, resume?

[u1286]

Hello again everyone

 

I am sorry I was really busy with my college assignments here. So could not update my Portfolio or CV. Today I am done making a few changes on my portfolio, I have definitely decreased the number of projects.

 

Earlier I had 13 and now I have 9 projects. Do you people still think I have unnecessary projects in my portfolio?

 

I still have to update my CV, in a day or two i will update it and post it here for feedback.

 

Even the College Assignments page i have lessened the number of projects and text as much i could do. If you all could give feedback on that too it would be really helpful.

 

Any other feedback about the portfolio is also welcomed, it would really help me to improve my portfolio.

 

http://udaintomar.wix.com/portfolio

 

Thanks once again everyone.

 

P.S: I had one more question I was thinking of buying a domain name, does it make any impact when i have a personalized address? If I have to buy, from where should  I buy the domain name?

[Em']

Hi u1286

 

I'm responding here to your PM, as i'm not myself a Game designer my advice may not be the best, but here what i can say : from fast-browsing your site, i can't really tell what you've done in each projects or what was your task, also images are very small, here is a picture of a project page of your site photoshoped to fit my standards for folios (using larger images to show more or explain with blueprints and scheme what you did...) http://i.imgur.com/qk2dFWx.png

 

Oh and some screens are a bit irrelevant : http://udaintomar.wix.com/portfolio#!fate-flux/c1h7zthis page show 3 time the home page of your game, and the credit page. Who give a f** to that ? Potential employer wants to see your work, what you've designed. A video of gameplay for each project would also be cooler : 1 image = 1000 words, 1 video = 1000 images

 

Other than that your work looks cool and I can only invite you to continue making games !

 

Good luck dude !

[u1286]

Hey Simon,

 

Thanks a lot for the feedback. I liked how you have given the photoshop edit of my game page. I will apply that to all the games. Thanks for the advice.

 

Thanks for the picture comment too. I will remove all the unnecessary ones.

 

For videos I don't have many videos but whatever I have, I have posted them.

 

Thanks and same to you, hope you do more kicka** artwork !

 

Thanks a lot !

[u1286]

Hi Everyone!

 

Recently updated my portfolio and resume. Would love to get some feedback.

 

http://udaintomar.wix.com/portfolio

 

Thank You!