de_nighthawk

sk3tch · May 13, 2007 at 3:49 AM

More lighting attempts. I think I'm kinda happy with this.

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mabufo · May 13, 2007 at 4:39 AM

It's looking nice, but I still think the airplane is sort of wonky.

sk3tch · May 13, 2007 at 5:05 AM

Quote from mabufo

It's looking nice, but I still think the airplane is sort of wonky.

Gonna learn to model one day. Until then (Or until I can find a good jet model) I'm going to use that one. I still have yet to make the custom textures for that. At the moment I'm just using a flat black.

El Moroes · May 13, 2007 at 6:36 PM

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At first, I though it was a HL 1 map..You really need to detail the whole thing and stop using brushes for everything.

+1

Add more details!! You can!!

I like your idea. It's a good beginning but that's too poor!

I wish you a good continuation for your map!

sk3tch · June 3, 2007 at 6:35 AM

More addons and fixes. Gonna add more lights near the control tower now that I look at it.

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Minos · June 3, 2007 at 7:03 AM

I really like this map's progress Could use a few colored lights here and there, because the lighting looks pretty much the same all over the map.

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I don't particularly dig that yellow'ish plaster wall. It's meant to be used indoors and basicaly looks too clean... it looks very flat and uninteresting too.

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This area could use some spotlights pointing upwards, it would look kickass in my opinion.

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More color!

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Those clean yellow plaster walls again...

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Remove the point_spotlights on the fluorescent lights. They don't make any sense.

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This scene has cool brushwork but the lighting is VERY bland. Place some strong orange'ish lights near the fire to make it more dramatic.

This map has a lot of potential, with some tweaks and a few custom materials here and there it can look really sweet.

sk3tch · June 3, 2007 at 7:14 AM

fkn awesome crits mino. You just got me motivated again.

I'll get right on all of that.

GregBoffins · June 3, 2007 at 11:50 AM

Nothing to add that already hasn't been said.

Good crtisicm is a very good motivational tool. Nothing worse than someone posting "ure map loks borin m4n, ad mor3 t3xturez"

El Moroes · June 3, 2007 at 2:47 PM

It looks better sk3tch !!! So now I can suggest you to add some overlays or decals and...hem...Mino has said good critics! lol

Psy · June 3, 2007 at 4:18 PM

I really like the second from last shot.

JohnSmith · June 3, 2007 at 10:04 PM

Very nice progress on this map, good job!

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This scene has cool brushwork but the lighting is VERY bland. Place some strong orange'ish lights near the fire to make it more dramatic.

And add a big glowing yellow/red sprite over the fire + a nice env_smoke using 2 colors (yellow/red near the fire - and pure black on the fading side)