ss_dawn

This is one of the strangest maps ive ever seen and I think its hard to give any crits, because -and pls dont be offended- there are many things that dont apeal to me.

I see alot of missused props lying all over the place without making an awfull lot of sense. I see grass that need to be displaced. I see a 3d skybox with blocky displacement. I see strange lighting. I see unusual brushwork and I see some unbalance in detail.

Then again, I see a lot of good potential. I allso see good architecture. I see strange but somehow cool lighting and I see some pretty good layout (as far as I can tell).

All I can say is: read enough tutorials about practically everything:

- architecture / brushworks

- lighting

- displacement

- balance in detail

- placement of cubemaps

And again: I am NOT trying to disencourage you my friend! I think you can be a good mapper, but please keep reading tutorials. Good tutorials can be found at interlopers. (http://www.interlopers.net. There's allmost nothing more relaxing than a fine afternoon of reading tut's.

Furthermore, your mod looks promising!

kt

tomato summed it up pretty much. It has great potential, but the brushing really needs work.

Agreed with everything that's already been said.

And your city skybox has a nuclear cooling tower in it - why?