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ha i totally pwnd u guys with that gun powz

very nice, but I'll have to play it to give some real crits/praise

Looks pretty nice fetter, but the lighting needs some work. And that kerb looks xtremely strange

Looks fairly good !

Looks great ferret.

I like the lighting in the first pic.

As JynxDaddy said one should really play a map before saying anything.

But it looks promissing at least

Spellbinder.

Looks cool m8!

As someone said, it needs lights. My suggestion is to use those cool spotlights to add some more detail to level

Anyway, change the env light a bit to it generates shadows to the environment

Keep going.

i agree. construction spotlights would do wonders for the map if properly placed. Me looks forward to more!

this is definitely the best source map ive seen so far. And looks like it fits HLDM as well. Id add some more colour, brightness and a happy skybox.

Btw doesnt this belong in the hl2dm contest forum?

shouldnt you be asking what he is going to do with his prize money?

I don't like it.

The colour scheme and lighting are very depressing. It looks like something you'd see in Red Orchestra. I'd prefer a bit of vibrancy to it.

well, its rather limited how jolly a construction site looks...

i think it would be nice with the lights (looking forward to those screens),

and perhaps add more surrounding stuff, like other buildings and whatnot?

Looks nice so far.

Don't know what to say that others haven't, so I'll shut up.

Good work, and I have some suggestions:

- Make the ground into a displacement also. You can make your own blended materials for this, so you can keep the current texture and add spots of grass, together with detail.vbsp to add 2D-grass detail sprites on the grass-spots on the displacement (omg, hard to read eh?). Some bulges here and there but not mountainpeaks .

- Spotlights in dark areas, like the red cagelight-prop with an intense red light_spot pitched downwards from the prop.

- Env_sun

y00 can do bettar fettar~

It does look very good playability wise.

It looks good. It's a little different than every other map being made for hl2, which is a good thing.

Looking good.

There's one thing I notice in HL2 maps...they're so gloomy and grey (except the sky).

Nice job on the map so far von*ferret ...Only thing I would complain about has more to do with the new engine than you. :wink: