Screen 1: Too much of that wood texture, doesn't fit on the outside walls. The structure thing there looks too simplistic, try replacing it with a sheet metal shed type thing. Also the room doesn't seem to be built with the intel in mind at all, I had to take several looks at the screenshot to actually notice it.
Screen 2&3 : Just, empty. Put more stuff, vary it up. That lightbulb in screen 3 makes no sense in it's current state.
What do you mean about the lightbulb? Does it just look weird in some way (position/brightness/etc), or do you mean there would be no practical use for a lightbulb there in reality?
Agreed on the other points though, still a long way to go. 
Looks very good, keep up the good work. 
Alpha 4 has been uploaded: http://slainchild.shackspace.com/files/ctf_creak_a4.zip
Alpha 4
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+Added playerclip brushes around and above the map to stop players getting to places they shouldn't be
+Removed an entrance to the mid-section side rooms on the upper level
+Changed a lot of textures
+Made a few custom posters/signs, placement not final
+Changed layout of the walkways in the flagrooms, only one ramp up to the upper level now
+Lots of architectural changes to both bases to make them more distinguishable from each other
+More detailing and displacement work
+Changed outdoors lighting and skybox
+Fixed missing player and object shadows
+Changed a lot of func_detail brushes into func_illusionary brushes to stop players getting stuck on them while walking near walls.
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Really digging some of the new details you've added. I like the texture/detail variations between the bases and how it's not too samey, but also not too different from one another.. if that makes sense
Cheers.
Been working a bit on the sniper "pillbox" room today:
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Complete with jars of piss you can shoot around
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Alpha 5 is ready for download: http://slainchild.shackspace.com/files/ctf_creak_a5.zip
Alpha 5
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+Added sloped roofs and trim to front of bases
+Changed terrain texture on Blu side
+Added a new underwater tunnel route to the mid section rooms from the base side corridors
+Made the middle water pool smaller
+Brightness and bloom of the outdoor lighting reduced
+Detailed Sniper bunker rooms
+Remade the cliffs above the bases
+Various texturing and trim work
+Added a few more arrow signs around the bases pointing to the enemy base
+Raised the ceiling in the long stairwells
+Changed and tweaked some of the spotlights/lightbulbs
+Added missing player clip brushes to steps that needed them
+Changed ramps into steps where needed
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Bears 
getting better and better, keep it up!
Made some new spytech spawnrooms since the map was missing any kind of shady science organization references:
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Work on some previously empty rooms too:
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New version, Alpha 6: http://slainchild.shackspace.com/files/ctf_creak_a6.zip
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Changes:
Alpha 6
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+Changed the spawn rooms for new ones with the Spytech theme
+Detailed more of the Red base rooms
+New mine shaft areas off to the side of the Red base
+Constructed and detailed most of the unreachable buildings above the bases
+Swapped the railings on the outside walkways for better fitting BSP versions
+The lower passages in the mid section are now cave tunnels
+Central shed is now accessible from the roof for Soldiers and Demomen rocketjumping or pipebomb jumping
+New elevator shafts in the mid section side rooms create some extra room (elevators are static)
+Moved the large health packs into the elevator shafts, put the large ammo crates in their place
+Added nobuild brushes around the rocks outside to prevent Engineers building sentries on them
+Various trim and detailing work done throughout the map
+Player clip volumes on stairs added where needed
+Texture changes in a few areas
thats getting better and better
Needs more trims imo :wink:
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