dm_moroes - my contest map

Looks pretty!

Sorry for straight honesty - the treehouse isn't too bad at all (except for the wooden corners in the ceiling UGH!), but just throwing in Warby's dystopia props in there doesn't make it a good nature-technology symbiosis

What is the fiction behind the level?

Hmmm yeah, looks good but yeah, that robo spider doesn't really look like it belongs there, hmmh.

The technology part seems like a bit of an afterthought, since it's just Warbys models scattered around the map. Also, in the greenhouse the texture scaling on the windows is a bit wacky, you could use a plain glass texture and then do the frames with brushes.

Also, I don't like the large shrubbery in the middle of the gameplay area, since bastard players are likely to hide in there and nail you with a crossbow when you walk past

Friechamp and the other replies pretty much nailed it. Overall it looks ok, especially the greenhouse, but it feels an a lot like a premade map with warby's models smacked in.

where are those foliage models from?

i agree with everyone my models don't go well with the rest (its a though topic/task i might add here )

-but removing my props is the wrong approach clearly

-replace everything BUT my props i SAY

SWEET!!!! Will add mirror asap

needs more pauly shore

Looks pretty nice imo but the textures look really stretched.

Screenshot 2 the trees look a little dark but Looks sweet!