Factory Rooms

Very nice, can't go wrong with godrays

I really like it, as Insta says then lightrays are always a sure win:) Only issue I see is the blue and the red prop textures, they don't fit in well with the grey/brown desatured look you got going.

nice, though it lacks some purpose. get some machinery in there, or something. if you;re going to make custom assets, make them really custom and have a specific place in the environment.

It's freakin beautiful. You can tell moreso in the video that the texture quality is exceptional and very consistent to the extent it actually feels like another engine. It has that stalker-like grittiness but it's not overdone like in some games. The hdr lighting is nailed so well too.

Bic, he said it's finished.

Saw this at CGTalk while ago. Very nice work

Hurrah, someone give that man a job.

Oh hang on ....

Still awesome..

Nice indeed.

haha i showed it to some classmates, and they thought that those were real photos in the beginning

i am impressed

Looks awesome. Keep it up!

Pure impressionism... good luck with your job!

hotness

Hot - watch the video, very impressive stuff man.

Hey, this piece damn near solid!

I've a few comments..

First off the texturing is nice, but very noisy. It looks as though everything shared the same detail texture. I'm sure you didn't use a detail texture, but everything looks as though there is.

Secondly, and probably more important than texture noise, is scale. Your scene has scale levels that are larger or smaller in some areas than in others. The paint can, for example, looks to be about the size of a keg. Same with the oil/gas container - they're huge. But then you look at the stool or the shelf and they're small.. almost scaled down in height but left 1:1 in width and length (re: scaled lower along the 'up' axis). I think another major factor in the scale looking off is the size of the windows compared to the rest of the room.

Other than that this piece is really tight. Perhaps some smaller markings on the ground - like oil drops/gum/wrappers or something.

Keep it up,

-Adam

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Looks awesome. Keep it up!

That's very good work Welcome to the industry

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Secondly, and probably more important than texture noise, is scale. Your scene has scale levels that are larger or smaller in some areas than in others. The paint can, for example, looks to be about the size of a keg. Same with the oil/gas container - they're huge. But then you look at the stool or the shelf and they're small.. almost scaled down in height but left 1:1 in width and length (re: scaled lower along the 'up' axis). I think another major factor in the scale looking off is the size of the windows compared to the rest of the room.

I don't want to argue but I totally disagree with all your points, lol

Especially... the last comment about the windows. There is certainly no rule for how big windows should be in relation to roomsize, particularly in buildings like factories where the windows aren't usually the main light source.

Glad to see you finally joined mapcore . As stated on cgtalk ... nice piece