de_nighthawk

A good start, but i think it needs sum more different heights.

And u could model the plane?

i think the brush based stealth bomber has a certain old school charm =)

remembers me of the dod map stuka by 3dmike with that plane goo' ol' times

Stuka was an official map for DoD 1.0, it just got removed later on.

I think overall the lighting is way too subtle. Almost bland. The colors aren't the problem, just the intensity

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I think overall the lighting is way too subtle. Almost bland. The colors aren't the problem, just the intensity

Yeah, it makes the map look a bit boring.

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/7416/56231667no0.jpg

Weird height variation there - you using a brush for that door that isn't the regular hl2 door size?

Change the colour of the warehouses's lights to a blue/green to give it a more grimy atmosphere.

At first, I though it was a HL 1 map..

You really need to detail the whole thing and stop using brushes for everything.

don't listen to them at all! I think it's great. lighting is crap though. make it dusk or even later and use some search lights and crap.

I'm just going to contradict everyone by saying that I like the lighting. I think that where the map lacks at the moment is random detail, just stuff laying on the floor, graffiti (if that fits with the map, at all), broken walls/floors etc. - something to make the area look a bit more "used".

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don't listen to them at all! I think it's great.

Should I ask why my opinion has less interest than your's ?

I've seen a lots of maps under the HL1's engine that were more detailled than this one.. so yes, it lacks details.

It doesn't mean that the map is crap or whatever, just that there's an urgent need for little things like stains on the walls, lamps for some lightsources, decals on the ground, and so on. The whole thing looks too bland (but this has been already said).

On the 4th screenie from the bottom, there's a very narrow building, looks really unreal. Maybe add a bit more depth to that particular building.

Nice theme, at least stands out from most of the other cs maps. The lighting needs some work imo. It looks a bit generic and adds nothing to the atmosphere. It will be cool if you get another skybox, maybe make one ? You can use Terragen for this.

Maybe add some lights to the outer areas, seems a little bland, a lot of the detail/brushwork is hidden as is. Looking pretty good otherwise.

looks better, but a bit too dark imho.