de_industrial *now with working pics*

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Just open those links. Anyway, now that I've had a chance to look at it, I love the brush and texture work. My only gripe would be the lack of overlays/decals and props. Some areas are littered with props while other areas there isn't a single one to be found. Add some crack decals to the outside floors, as judging from the buildings themselves, the area has been in use for a while. It'd give it more character and add to the realism factor. Light posts, telephone poles, garbage cans, and so forth also wouldn't hurt. The lighting is so-so. With cloud-cover as that you wouldn't tend to see such strong shadows, so lighten them up a bit. Otherwise, good work! I can't wait to see more! Also, if you aren't going to complete it, I'd love to take a gander at it and see what I can come up with, as it'd be a shame to see this sent to the scrap book.

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architecture is at some places pretty dull (first exterior pics), lightning is also pretty blend. interiors however are nice!

and as Ilr says:

cl_drawhud 0

r_drawviewmodel 0

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my suggestion would be to try and add a little contrast to the whole scene with some more interesting lighting and to make the building more appealing by adding a bit more detail and depth to them (exterior part). The streets need a little more props and since its an industrial map, you might want to add more vehicles and adds.

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oh, and i know this is a wip, but i assume you want comments on this so here you go

that explains alot

yeah why not overdo it? the map has lots of potential!

I think it feels to flat. Especially the road. It would make a huge difference if you would just get some very slight bumps, height variation and even some U-shape on the road. Of course doing this would complicate for the buildings around a bit but it would totally be worth it imo.

The more completed areas look great tho.

The more complete parts definitely look good. The buildings look very solid and interesting, and the inside sections have a real world feel. Some of the outside areas feel a touch too open, but this is probably because they lack detail at the moment. Telephone poles and general clutter, more vehicles, bins, bollards, smoke, overhanging walkways, curved geometry and huge chimneys would really add to the look.

In some areas, it might be worth getting rid of the roads, and adding gravel instead. Lots of maps that are built along roads seem to look a bit too airy and flat. Using gravel instead would allow you to bring the buildings closer together, and add a bit of height variation to the lower part of the structures, as well as the bumpiness PhilipK talks of. I would also say that things feel a bit too square. Not the actual buildings themselves, but their orientation in the world. Some angled buildings would really make things feel less hammeresque.

If you are not going to complete the project as it is, then it could worth moving all of the geometry over to a small hostage map. Think of something like cs_compound, where the bulk of the mapping would have been in making the cental building. If you spent a while making a really nice central building, you could then drop all of these buildings into the map afterwards.

It would be a shame to see the work wasted.

Cool pics you got there man