[WIP] dod_omaha

that's a really nice props placement .

I don't like the lighting.

i like my fps at that map

the idea is great, but the map is too narrow, and too cramped with props

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the idea is great, but the map is too narrow, and too cramped with props

Looks promising though

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that's a really nice props placement .

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I don't like the lighting.

Great consctructive criticisme guys, its really great of you to take your time to review the map properly!

That aside, From the first screenshot, the first thing that caught my eye was that the bunker was really square ;P pff but hey, its a bunker right.. The texture on it is also repeating..

The second screenshot looks good, the ground could use a last touch, but to me it looks okay..

The third screenshot, well its the same here, the ground could use some more attention, there are a few pointy patches.. other than that you might want to check if there really should be this many sandbagprops out.. Its all fine and good that the germans where really heavily fortified on that beach, but i dont think they had those oddly halfcircled sandbag things placed all over

The fourth picture is just a bunch of props tossed together, make that more interesting architecturewise^^

Fifth picture looks okay, not sure why the germans would stack some sandbags up against those walls, but oh well im not a soldier

The last picture also looks cluttered with props (the near camera).

Overall this is a good start, keep those pictures coming, and dont pay attention to the grumpy old bastards there ;D

one word: 3d skybox

Take it easy on the props buddy

i dont get why there are hedgehogs everywhere. they arem mainly used to stop tanks, why do you have them on the tops of cliffs?

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i dont get why there are hedgehogs everywhere. they arem mainly used to stop tanks, why do you have them on the tops of cliffs?

to stop people? notice that they're barbed together

The metal on top of the trenches looks out of place, maybe try using a wood texture.

i like it but I'd use mud as ground texture for the trenches... would make it look like people actually walked around there...

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Beach = massive attack, any thing is good to block the way.

my point is that it looks like he just flew up high and clicked blindly, at least get some pattern to them to make them effective

like klein said make the mud at the bottom of the trenches. these were recently dug trenches that people trasverse in. Maybe find a decal that looks like foot prints to put where the buildings meet the trenchs? might help add atmosphere

I was going to say remove the sand bags frominside the concrete walls but it looks like you already did that.I'd keep the concrete walls instead of wood myself, because they were not exaclty RUSHED fortifications. They were actualy fortified. But keep the sand bags for outside to merge concerete>sand bags>grass>open space. Like a stepping stone of fortifications so it looks better.

Remove the tank hedgehogs, no matter the purpose they look stupid. Find something that looks like it holds barb wire inplace, but those hedgehogs are well known to be tank stopping devices that stop tanks, not infantry. They look remarkably stupid at the top of the cliff like the designer did not know their purpose. It would make me stop and say "wait why are those there, to stop tanks from going OVER the cliff onto the beach???"

i love the grass sprouts

yes grass is nice. Nice new trenches too. Can't wait to see more man.