cs palmrich

Ah that s nice, lightening seems to be well done, it s 12 hour i guess, cuz as i can see by the shadows, the sun is right on the top :wink: .

And change me those ugly textures on the road and the crete building

looks good, but i dont know about that cliff in the background.

The architecture is a little chunky and reminds me of HL1 -- it could use a little finesse, as if to say "I AM SOURCE, HEAR ME ROAR". 'Un-orthogonalise' some of it for starters. The actual atmosphere looks good, as I could quite imagine that forecourt being an actual place. One niggly thing I noticed is that you have some lights in the first picture that are on and not illuminating anything

Right now it has the deathmatch arena feeling. As far as i can see your level is surrounded by rocks, which completely ruins the "this isn't a map but a part of the world" feeling. Change that, first of all Show the player that there's more out there

At a first glance, it looked pretty convincing really.

Another note though: the newspaper dirt on the floor looks slightly out of place. Garbage is usually found around full garbage-cans and such. There's just a little too much garbage on one spot on an otherwise clean parking lot. Just felt odd.

Yeah, or it'll collect in corners where the wind has pushed it.

Good start.

Looks pretty good nexus. Keep it up man.

The first pic looks cool, second pic just needs better texture choices.

I dunno bout the garbage. It looks to me like it is in the corner, not everything packed all the way into the corner, but i don't think it has to, it would depend on the winds i guess.

It looks good nexus, but i need an overview to see the gameplay

Spellbinder.

scale down the floor texture, also add light spot to those flourescents

like it, add some glows

I really like what I see in the last few pics... it really does look like one of the hott ass town where all you want is air conditioning... The only thing that seems to be missing here is a proper sky box

NAAICCEE!!!

Very good. This map has the CS feel to it in my opinion.

Not much criticism...Does it run smooth?

Lookin very good nexus~

It looks like it plays well from the screenshots. Looks good too. I love the warm colours. I would just like a little bit more detailed architecture on some places. But I guess that is a matter of performance too.

Other than that, I only have two small things to say:

The handicap parking lot is placed furthest away from the exit when its supposed to be nearest.

Looks a little weird when the refuge (dont know if its called that in english but you are swedish right? so in swedish its called "refug") exceeds the painted lines on the ground.

Keep it up. Are you going to playtest it soon?

Edit:

I would prefer another background than that cliff. A desert would be more nice with small details in. Would be cool tumbleweeds blowing by. I think:

http://www.nau.edu/~envsci/ESPGSO/activ ... &ocean.JPG

http://www.luminous-landscape.com/image ... _Dunes.jpg

and perhaps http://www.migraonline.com/images/03roy ... inging.jpg