Looks very good, especially with borders:) Yep, the haiku for sure had to go. Having some kind of wise quote is not bad, it just has to be the right one.
my new site wip: need opinions
-
-
keep it on a grey/yellow background, not too bright without borders.
Maybe a 1 or 2 pixels not too obvious border.
-
Nice design, how it works with different resolutions/browsers/platforms? It comes to me as a pretty heavy on the bling bling, and I like my things minimal. You don't have any subtle piece on your site, everything feels like too heavy and carved with meaning so people might get confused with the site.
How about the technical side? What is being used? Full CSS or tables? Seems pretty hard to update, but that is your problem so the end user don't care, but you might not want to make small updates because of all the hard work it requires and updates are less frequent.
I like the harmony of the colors, brings some breath of fresh air, but it is taken down by the book in the middle which seems too heavy and unintended for some reason.
I hope that helps, great design.
-
without
-
i like it with without the border. I didn't like the Haiku, because it was an indirect way of saying "please Hire me"
. I like the no border because its simple and elegant. If your going to use chinese/japanese symbols did you first check and see what they mean, just incase a HR can read them
. -
Despite the majority advice I got here from people who's opinions I respect, I went with the borders...
http://jonmdesign.net/newsite/
check it out

-
Im not a big fan of the haiku, it should be something like~
"It takes lots of time and effort" or something. not stuff imho.
-
Fantastic website, I dig the "drag corners to turn pages" feature. But for the love of god, get rid of that haiku!

-
-
look above ^^^^^~~
-
yea i'll mess around with it some more try some more border variations
theres gonna be a music off feature ( i dont like music on sites either
)the haiku is temporary till i can think of a better one
thanks for the feedback tho guys, its really helpin

-
Haiku's funny but i wouldn't put it on a portfolio site. Besides that i'd go for the one with the borders
-
Participate now!
Don’t have an account yet? Register yourself now and be a part of our community!