[CSGO] de_cargo

It looks great but now you have even more clutter right on the choke! you really should remove that scaffold as it's going to make A entries horrible. the damaged wall needs to be rebuilt in such a way it doesn't screw visibility too- something jack mentioned in the playtest.

Just now you have 1-way visibility advantaging the defenders. AND on top of that you've added some props with metal railing to block shots...

It's really about the size of the choke as any player that knows what they are doing will always stay close to the edges of the choke when peaking to minimize their hitbox

think about how the areas I've circled would affect the gameplay.

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The issue is much more with head/torso height cover created with the brushwork than lower body stuff.

That brick that floats in the air in the middle there really needs to go! Otherwise I really like the width of the hole.

Looks much better imo.

Have you fixed the timings?

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Ok I came up with something like this:

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I still don't really like that barbed wire on the concrete barriers, I feel it could reduce visibility maybe.

Do the screens above include a picture of bombsite B?

Detailing looks great

if you can post the updated overview too

Looks a little bit grey? I would love to see some colour added and I think it would help the visuals greatly.

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Looks a little bit grey? I would love to see some colour added and I think it would help the visuals greatly.

Yes, I agree. color could help. But remember, color isn't only aesthetic. It often plays a big part in the gameplay. Use bright colors/lights to direct the player which ways are actually paths and darken/dullify areas that are just dead ends.

It's crazy how quickly this is changing. It looks a lot better, but for the love of god, please remove all the barbed/razor wire from on top of the concrete barriers!

B looks much more interesting for gameplay, but I find the site itself to be a little unbelievable. The overhang is far too low down to warrant having any vehicle refuel at that station and it's also unsupported which makes it look less real.

Overall, good job

It's shaping up nicely (and fast too!).

On this screen http://i.imgur.com/8hHx6Hu.jpgmaybe the windows can be opened so you can throw grenades?

It's a bit dull and grey, there are no dominant colors, but that's because of the theme. The theme itself is a bit too classic.

More variations in height (3D skybox and on buidlings) would be nice?

On this screen http://i.imgur.com/49DrfXj.jpgthe communist prop seems out of place, your map doesn't look "russian" at all.

I'm nitpicking, I don't find much to say about it, I think it's great.

Also, why cargo?

Yeah what Klems said. Some height variation in the buildings would be nice. And a detailed 3D skybox with towering factories and stuff that fit your theme would make it feel a tiny bit less generic.