As I told you in reddit, I'd do something with the crane and stairs, both disturb gameplay, and the HDR light is way too strong. Besides that the layout seems solid so it can become a really good map. As austin suggest, I'd also do something with the theme to make it sell more if possible.
Good job 
feedback dump
This metal texture is an odd choice for a doorway. That sort of metal plating is usually used for floors, since the texture provides grip for shoes. (I think that's why, at least!)
Concrete post for an otherwise chainlink fence? Seems costly for construction.
Who put these crates here? Really odd place for that many crates to be stacked.
The biggest issue I have with this map is the setting. Things seem to be thrown in with little rhyme or reason. For example, this entire underground sewer-ish area. I can't figure out what it's purpose is! There's random boxes stacked up, which seems to imply storage. There's a wide metal scrolling door, which implies the same thing. However, there's a car parked on a ramp into the area, which seems to imply that it's also an area for residential traffic, but then there's a set of wide stairs leading down... even if this area could exist through the results of poor urban planning, it doesn't feel like anything you'd find in real life.
Another instance. How'd this van get here? Also, why is there an ad printed on the side of what appears to be a residential building?
I'd do some more nitpicky stuff, but I need to go to class. I like the fact that you're putting in lots of little details, but the overall theme of the map isn't pulling itself together. Look at your detailing from a larger perspective before diving into the little detals. Good effort.
One last note: heh
I like the layout of this map but the texturing and prop work is a little random at times.
You can get on the roof at B quite easily btw. not sure if intended
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