I've done a bit more work on my level taking some of the feedback that was given (thanks again Beck!)
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I've pushed back the flag rooms so that the crazy short capture time (around 11 and a half seconds! :S) area little longer. A 100% perfect run from flag to flag is still only 17 seconds but it's such a direct route through the entire level that doing so without coming up against any resistance should be pretty rare.
Here are some alternative angles for this...
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[Blocked Image: http://i.imgur.com/xLczvd7.png]This shows the view through the old window near the ramps. Both ramps are still present.
[Blocked Image: http://i.imgur.com/j9NB3dh.png]Yet another ramp has been added however to give yet more choices.
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I've also added lifts from the bottom floor to the middle floor on either side. Still debating if I should get rid of the middle bridge section all together though, it would drastically add to the capture time and force players to go up or down from the flag to get back to base.
[Blocked Image: http://i.imgur.com/PKEDvlk.png]A view of the lifts from the bottom floor.
[Blocked Image: http://i.imgur.com/HTVGUlh.png]And just for kicks, one from the top floor.
Overall I'm starting to not like my level that much anymore. I will still submit it at the end of the challenge but I think I've already learn't a lot from it that moving forward I might do differently.
Again your feedback would be appreciated and if anyone wants to see more video of it just let me know.