maybe add some more height variation to the chimneys? also maybe some kind of supports for the roof on the left side of the buildings? looking really nice though 
cool but needs more color, original concept has allot, your stuff seems desaturated and lacks contrast don't rely on lighting to add the color
Quote from 2d-chriscool but needs more color, original concept has allot, your stuff seems desaturated and lacks contrast
I couldn't make stone look as white as it was in the concept art, and there isn't much color in the building its just browns and grays. other then a couple of red spots.
you could maintain the red roofs as seen on the conceptart and make the flag a little bigger (longer) to add some coloring?
Quote from NeilJones313I couldn't make stone look as white as it was in the concept art, and there isn't much color in the building its just browns and grays. other then a couple of red spots.
(I'm stranger to modeling) Is that because of the texture, rendering or other stuff?
For the color, seems to me that the concept art hue is generally shifting to the reds while your is more neutral. Then yes, the roof contrasts quite a bit in the concept.
looking way better! any other changes on the list or will this be final?
get in a game engine rather than doing these renders
Architecturally this is sacrilege. You took an Italian building and put American "textures" on it. The concept art is for Assassin's Creed Brotherhood, not 3. Other than that, you have talent. Consider studying more architecturally appropriate models.
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