Sci Fi scene CE3

theonebutcher · March 29, 2012 at 3:25 PM

Hi Guys!

New here and first post! was recommended this forum by PogoP so thought I would post up my current WIP for Critique.

Ive been working on this on and off when not at work for my portoflio so really wanting this to be good quality, if anyone has any suggestions or advice I would love to hear them!

Here are some grabs of the scene so far.

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Crits and comments appretiated guys!

Cheers for looking!

PogoP · March 29, 2012 at 3:55 PM

That has really come on leaps and bounds since I last saw it Jimmy boy, good work! That meat looks awesome.

Welcome to the Core

Warby · March 29, 2012 at 4:16 PM

nice story tlling there in the "order" that ou posted the shots

1) all normal scifi hmmk

2) is that some alien infestation organic shit back there ?

3) getting closer omfg it is !

4) too close its sucking me in wuuuaaghahahahahahahahahahahahaha *camera drops to the floor*

Skacky · March 29, 2012 at 4:50 PM

You have a huge System Shock 2 vibe going on. I have no complaints, everything looks very good. I love it.

(Duh, I didn't see that Von Braun Med Labs sign, silly me)

Thrik · March 29, 2012 at 4:52 PM

That's gorgeous. Lovely use of ambient smoke/fog, something often missed out of such scenes.

knj · March 29, 2012 at 5:05 PM

dude, that is sweet, better than Dead Space IMO, great work !!!

theonebutcher · March 29, 2012 at 5:42 PM

Thanks guys! really glad that you like it!

PogoP: thanks mate good to be here, there is an impressive catalogue of smilies to use lol

Warby: thanks man! im really glad that you like it man!

@Shacky: I really loved SS2 man, always wanted to make something on those lines! your the only person that has noticed really one other guy commented elsewhere! glad that you like it man!

Thrik: Thanks man really glad that you like the scene.

knj: thanks man! loved dead space and was a big influence on this so really pleased that you think that.

Thanks for taking the time to have a look guys!

Jenn0_Bing · March 29, 2012 at 7:57 PM

I remember seeing the start of this over at Polycount (I spy greentooth). Has come along really well since my last sighting.

The only particular comment I have, is that the transition to flesh is very abrupt. You've done some to blend into it, but at the moment it's very metal, alpha'd flesh then flesh-blob in distinct bands. How about adding some tendrils that run from the main body out along the floor/walls a bit to blend between the stages a bit more. Another cool thing could be pulling up and bending the ends of some of the panels nearer the flesh as if it's burst through from behind.

theonebutcher · March 30, 2012 at 12:22 PM

Here is the renders of the scene so far,e. I was hoping at this point you guys could give me some feedback on the scene and let me know if there are any areas that require improvement please.

Here are the grabs:

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Crits and comments really appretiated at this point

Cheers again to everyone who has given crits and feedback so far and to everyone who has looked!