Fantasy Graveyard Mini Scene

Looks cute! I don't like the way the sides of the wall hang over the base area at the moment, so maybe make it a little wider so it doesn't float off? Really like the cartoony texture style though. The area behind the fence is a bit lifeless and could use something. Maybe a skeleton propped against it or some ivy growing up from behind. Would also be nice if the fence had a big cemetery gate in the middle of it that was open, bridging the front and back areas more. Some mushrooms or foliage would also help spice it up I reckon. Great work so far!

Oh, ignore the ivy idea.. seems it was there all along go for mushrooms!

reminds me of Warcraft and looks very professional

I'm not in to this type of env but i like it a lot, as someone above said this has that warcraft feel but i would add some more stuf behind a fence like stone crosses ect to make it more

busy

nice work.

why not play up the cut the turntable makes in the earth to surprise us with something buried under there...?

Love it man! Perfect piece for October.

Ahh I love the tree stumps! Looks like you've put a lot of effort into what could've been a far simpler model. Like how the bark sticks up past the stump. Really wanna see the scene expanded even further now!

yeah, the trees stumps are just great, love the cartoonish style, good work

Awesome !! The assets look great ! I often have that crit, but maybe it's just my tastes, all the assets are very monochromatic and don't seem to share a common color hue; the grass is green, the earth is brown, the tombs are grey etc etc ... It's cool because maybe it's the cartoonish style you want to give to the scene, but i find the lighting doesn't give justice to your great assets

I think it looks superb

Really nice work Jenn0_Bing.

Sweet!

looks sweet!! although im not really sure about the blue color of the fence (makes the other colors seem harder, unless that is what you want).

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So here is a big update! I spent the last week working like mad on all the new foliage pieces I’ve added. The largest part of the work is behind the railings, but I have also done a lot to the front area too. Nearly every asset has got another pass of love. Most of this work was done to bring a greater sense of unity to my colour pallet. Gonna call this done, as now I feel I need to move on to another project for a bit. That is unless anyone has any more awesome advice, otherwise I'll sort this into my portfolio soon.

Thanks for the comments again guys, much appreciated. I hope I addressed your colour concerns too Koko, it certainly made an improvement to my eyes.

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Fantastic !!! awesome job in the end

As your scene is seen for very close, be careful about the pixel ratio of everything !

It would looks also super cool with some fresnel in the shader for the render i think

Really awesome job, I'd try and get rid of the grass seam around the base though

Awesome work man, but there is still something in your lighting that doesn't give justice to your scene, try to create an atmosphere with more contrast, maybe find an engine to render the radiosity you can't do in marmoset ( maybe you could still try to render it in vertex colors with max and use it in marmoset but i'm not sure that's even possible)

Yeah it's you an atmosphere you need, with more contrasts, shadows and all .. don't worry if some assets can't be seen, you can still keep this version to show the assets ! But show also you can make a cool alive atmosphere !