dm_underpass *download beta 3*

looks pretty damn good

Yep, but some more eyecandy will be good (i know you are going to add that later)

How is the map layout wise? Seems like it's pretty complicated, like you need to learn how to play the map. My opinion is that DM maps should flow natualy for the player...

Looks great! Dont put the citadel in there.

Looks really great man, I love this one. The only thing that I really dont like are those crazy buildings on the last pic, really dont fit the theme.

Really hot

Some of the walls look a bit too tall, though :-?

Much there, Kami.

Looking great there, Kami. I don't think the buildings look off. If you look at the reference it looks spot on.

Sexual. The brushwork, the lighting... it all comes together so well to create a single, powerful theme.

Outdoor parts looks great, the indoor areas look rather plain and dull and have some rather unlogical pipe constructions like

http://www.w00th4x0r.com/hl2dm/dm3t0006.jpg

http://www.w00th4x0r.com/hl2dm/dm3t0007.jpg

I really like the look of this, not much to criticise about it really. Could perhaps benefit from some small dashes of colour around the interiors? I'n clutching at straws, what can I say!

Looks awesome, and quite large as well. Good job!

that looks pretty damn cool man. good job.

Lol, yes. It looks pretty good outdoors, but your indoors suffer a bit. Those pipes are definitely a problem, because it seems like it'd be physically very unrealistic to have pipes in those positions.

http://www.w00th4x0r.com/hl2dm/dm3t0009.jpg

In that picture for example, why are the handle things on the pipes totally unreachable from the platform? One of the pipe turns around on itself halfway through too, which doesn't really make any sense. All these things have a big impact on the immersion and will be picked up by people, so be extra careful with that stuff.

i would like to point out the hand crank valve in hl2......in the level where you have to break open the floatable devices trapped under the water in order to jump to the other side (its like the 3rd puzzle)

the valve to raise the water was in a completely unrealistic place

You see stuff like that all the time in real life. Redundant valves that are seemingly unreachable; it's not so unrealistic.

Then again, who cares? I'm all for a logical, well-thought out map, but accurate pipe systems isn't really a priority, especially considering the tight deadline on this competition.

Also: are the pipes models or brushes?

/me clubs kamikazes kneecaps. must stop competition !!!!

i like it, but...

thats the best sewer you can do?