WIP in WIP, post your level screenshots!

Quote from knj

no shop in there ?

Don't think it's an RPG, doesn't need a shop ;p

Seriously though, looking great penE, but I find it hard to focus on anything in particular, if that's your goal though it's well done

[Blocked Image: http://images.tinypic.pl/i/00407/rdtlfmtas797.jpg]

trying to fix myself a folio and working on grabing some decent shit %)

That looks really nice, has some potential to be an awesome portfolio piece

I don't think the sand ground fits in there. Makes you wonder if it's supposed to be a forest or a beach scene. Also don't be afraid to spend some more polygons on those trees and rock stones.

Quote from knj

[Blocked Image: http://images.tinypic.pl/i/00407/rdtlfmtas797.jpg]

trying to fix myself a folio and working on grabing some decent shit %)

wow that's great! Agreed about the sand, not sure what I'd replace it with however

Oh crap ! I thought it was snow x)

About the sand, I think you should add more color, something closer to earth, and also water puddle, grass, etc. You cannot keep this white color =s

[Blocked Image: http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_hA6jfDxiaDY/R1Am1TXK8cI/AAAAAAAAAEQ/DgKb7E2ohnA/s1600-R/Rainbow%27s+End+Forest+01.jpg]

Nice scene btw

the foliage in the background comes out as really flat like that, there is no depth to it now

great tips you guys ! thanks a lot

The jagged bumps on the ground are really ugly. Smooth that out and put some of those polys to use on those boxy rocks on the bottom left.

The house looks great though.

the jaggies are from the displacement map

that's right, it's a displacement with parallax

I think it's much simpler, you've gone for an autumn setup but the sand is just about the only thing that would not change given the time of year, simple google autumn and you have the answer https://www.google.co.uk/search?q=autum…tN8bLtAafpYDgBw

[Blocked Image: http://www.fotoviva.co.uk/PhotosStock/Au…t-landscape.jpg]

the ground, sky and atmospherics all fit the time of year, no need to reinvent the wheel.; I think this in general is a time we often forget in games and is quite honestly the most beautiful of them all

thx dude !

So i did try to apply some of your tips and this is how it came out - i thing this is much better (still i want to finish my folio till the end of this week so i need to call this done and as for the env it's almost 2years old)

[Blocked Image: http://images.tinypic.pl/i/00407/0bmg458ryq0f.jpg]

[Blocked Image: http://pics.tinypic.pl/i/00407/ut2v4gwrzndc.jpg]

[Blocked Image: http://pics.tinypic.pl/i/00407/j6pwxiqxl3iz.jpg]

thx again guys !

2 last shot's were taken in a bit of hurry so i will probably work on composition and light

all what i can see is a large plane. Maybe you want to add some higher and lower terrain

knj try playing with the lighting, maybe try some more contrast. Currently the trees blend with the sky rather than stand out against it.

[Blocked Image: http://pics.tinypic.pl/i/00407/9e8f990cpw3c.jpg]

[Blocked Image: http://pics.tinypic.pl/i/00407/14udtrj9xbx7.jpg]

[Blocked Image: http://files.tinypic.pl/i/00407/yjrt261mpmld.jpg]

thanks you guys again for the great tips, but i need to wrap this part up, so i've made some new shots, and i will try to select smth for my folio

So I read page 691 and did a quick silly mock up off some ideas, then when I finished, I was like... ooo another page I missed... anyways, this was the quick 3 min thing I did.

I was going to suggest more of a dirt / mud setting with leaves from the trees on the ground (especially since it's fall). I also added a funny looking path to the house for SAFE travel through the mud!

The content cannot be displayed because it is no longer available.

junk_a2.

Looks cool tough, even if the sky could be more blue, BLUE I WANT SOME BLUE.

Quote from knj

i've made some new shots, and i will try to select smth for my folio

A flythrough video would be awesome... wouldn't it?

maybe later, but i will keep that in mind