WIP in WIP, post your level screenshots!

robert.briscoe · November 20, 2009 at 11:41 PM

Ok so im nearly done with my Unearthly entry, but I could really do with some decent feedback before I submit anything:

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Edit also tell me if you like this shot:

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st0lve · November 20, 2009 at 11:49 PM

On the "sail pole" (god knows what it's real name is), it's burning on the crossbeam, but the vertical part is flame-free. Since flames move upward, they would be climbing the vertical pole. A small detail, but then again, that's what you probably need to fix.

Nineaxis · November 21, 2009 at 12:28 AM

Last one (full scene) looks the best. And it all looks really well done.

Chrono · November 21, 2009 at 12:46 AM

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Lord Ned · November 21, 2009 at 1:16 AM

Robert: The smoke/fog behind the boat looks more like bad flare smoke from HL2:Ep1 than real smoke.

I think it needs some more depth?

dux · November 21, 2009 at 2:25 AM

First shot with the bids is excellent.I have no complaints.

VoodooBenshee · November 22, 2009 at 10:06 AM

very early wip:

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VoodooBenshee · November 22, 2009 at 10:44 AM

yeah, fantastic game and the editor is amazing =) the only crappy thing is the connection between town and your dungeon, but works now. the level is already playable (monsters, loot ect). next thing i´ll try is the questsystem and a boss area

Skjalg · November 22, 2009 at 1:15 PM

looks sweet voodoo

TermInator525 · November 22, 2009 at 5:41 PM

a (for me) 2 Day Contest. The theme is a mine without restriction of any kind.

9hrs of work.

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Em' · November 22, 2009 at 6:42 PM

WOW Terminator, I love your work !

Really good ! It's a very good immersion on a mine, I feel so deep the atmosphere and darkness of the space !

Kind of a great genius !

Nysuatro · November 22, 2009 at 9:29 PM

Its a bit too lit for being in a cave to my opinion.

TermInator525 · November 22, 2009 at 9:31 PM

thats hdrr. But yeah its maybe a bit too bright.

voodoochopstiks · November 23, 2009 at 12:40 AM

Bobby B: That looks really really awesome! Very moody scene, and quite delicious! Tried to look for things to fix, but it wasn't easy. Viking funerals always bring a tear to my eye The ravens are a nice touch, perhaps a real path/road next to the house, leading up the mountain, along most of the torches might be a nice addition?

Benshee, cool to see torchlight stuff in the works. Looks promising!

Terminator: Maybe turn down the contrast a bit? The darks are very dark, and the brights very bright, it's hard to get a sense for the place. Maybe add some subtle fog in as well?

TermInator525 · November 23, 2009 at 1:02 AM

a grayish fog is already in there you fool (2nd picture, light gray in the background ) i only have to tweak the hdr settings. And well no photoshop work in here, scaled down 100% screenshots.

2d-chris · November 23, 2009 at 9:01 AM

nice stuff - you lot are waaaay too talented

robert.briscoe · November 23, 2009 at 4:26 PM

Well all done and submitted, wish me luck! Here are some high res images of the final piece:

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Thanks for the feedback everyone, it's been really useful!

Psy · November 23, 2009 at 4:46 PM

Really nice work Rob. Good luck in the contest. Here's my own entry for the PLR/CTF contest at TF2Maps. Admittedly these screenshots are from my contest submission (October) and I've made some changes to the 3D skybox since then so the tree cards aren't so stupidly high up.

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Only the first 2 stages out of 3 are detailed and I'm already nearing the maximum number of allowed brushes. SOURCE!