City17: Episode 1

The Horse Strangler · December 13, 2008 at 9:03 PM

Been working on some more thing's here and there with my project, wanted your guys feedback!

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Acumen · December 14, 2008 at 8:31 AM

Im totally loving the lighting - such a nice atmosphere !

Freak · December 14, 2008 at 8:52 AM

yeah, really great lightning

e-freak · December 14, 2008 at 4:10 PM

lighting is great, brushwork and texturing could use some second go (mainly details afaik tell from those tiny screenshots)

The Horse Strangler · December 14, 2008 at 9:45 PM

Which Screen in particular?

e-freak · December 14, 2008 at 9:58 PM

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3084/310 ... f14174.jpg - the ceiling is kind of weird broken and the walls could use some vertical break horizontal bar) but maybe that's just me

The Horse Strangler · December 16, 2008 at 12:48 AM

Ah yeah, that is the way it is due to it being stairwell, although I do agree that the steps could use some more random orientation.

dux · December 16, 2008 at 6:45 PM

Brushwork looks fine to my eyes.

RA7 · December 16, 2008 at 9:29 PM

nICE ATMOSPHERE INDEED

(damn capslock)

narby · December 16, 2008 at 9:33 PM

I guess I'm in the minority, but I don't like the lighting that much, it feels very monotone somewhat flat. Little bit too much yellow and too bright outside - The outside rubble part in picture 4 is nice though, the telephone poles are a nice touch.

The fire in the third picture could use some wood/rubble/crap to hide the point where the particle meets the ground. Also, the walls in the stairwell could use bit of color, maybe a stripe covering the bottom half of the wall, just something to break up the flat grey concrete.

Other than that, good stuff.

The Horse Strangler · December 18, 2008 at 6:40 AM

Hmm I agree with the breakup in look, perhaps a bottom half Border. Otherwise a lot of the screenshots do have a lot of Warm safe lighting. I should have gotten a bit more of our Darker colder areas.

I'll add some of those in a bit later today.

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