Business Card concepts

octinium

OCT

you should just abandon the layout you have altogether.....in black and white it will look nasty

i dont like the font you used in yours ol, besides that it looks ok

at first glance i thought it was ascii

ok so we went to the place to see what was up and heres the deal

the owner convined us that we should go for the traditional look instead of the techy and said that he liked this one best

[Blocked Image: http://www.boomspeed.com/ozimander/newone.jpg]

now, heres what i need you to change:

the background must be WHITE and text BLACK

remove the gear from the top left

make the card 3.25 INCHES BY 1.75 INCHES (THIS IS VERY IMPORTANT)

i am still accepting submissions but as of right now i would really like to see a traditional/classy type card. also....curman can you try to make that same card with NO pictures....as in just simple text modfication layouts....no pictures

the guy that owns the place basically said pictures make it too busy, it should be a BUSINESS card, not a masterpiece

we're getting the copies made tomorrow, so if you were ever going to contribute, now is the time

btw the guy just gave me an estimate on the job you will get, its like $200, sine hes making about 3000 prints

so $200 for 15 minutes worth of work.....take it before i do! (duffy is an mspaint master)

keep the borders thats what made it look nice, you have to realize...theres going to be A LOT of shit on this card....my name, my phone number, my address, etc etc etc

btw i liked what ol put "computer services" so put that

lose the monitor, put the border back though

i can add the text myself thats not the problem, the PROBLEM is the design,

heres what you should really do for me right now that is ten times more important then the business card itself

I NEED A LOGO

OCTINIUM <<

turn this into a logo, change something about it, make the NAME a PICTURE, like all the logo's you see all over the place (refer to the top of this page, the big MAPCORE logo)

if you would like to take the logo you make and put it onto the business card, thats fine too....but i really need the word octinium to be nice looking