Hello good sir, sorry for the late reply. I too have alot on right now.
Lovly to see you addressing some of my concerns/opinions i had on your map. You can't follow every piece of advice, but the changes seem to improve the map overall. I haven't played the level too recently with players to address gameplay opinions, but your tweaks so far are welcomed. Keep it up, try find sometime if you possibly can.
As for any issues etc you can always find examples at: Steam\steamapps\common\dayofinfamy\sdk_content\maps\example [within that folder you will find example maps, these might help out. Look at the: light_environment etc etc incase you still have lighting issues. (the example folder at this current time is to assist mappers).
- Daruth505