mmhm perhaps - it took so long to render it out - and it does have lighting in there unless you mean a background with some heavy lighting akin to the graveyard scene?
Thanks for crits I will take them into account and make a short run through of the source level (I didn't do any level design, I should mention, just the props) - I'll look into putting a sky behind the building and rendering it with some more intense lights.
Do you think there's anything I should remove, or not have so many spinning shots (which don't let you look at the detail imho - just wanted something other than plain screenshots), etc
Anyway, thanks for crits.