Very nice progress on this map, good job!
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This scene has cool brushwork but the lighting is VERY bland. Place some strong orange'ish lights near the fire to make it more dramatic.
And add a big glowing yellow/red sprite over the fire + a nice env_smoke using 2 colors (yellow/red near the fire - and pure black on the fading side)