In The Works ...

Too dark, even on my uber bright works LCD. Definetly getting there though, maybe have some lights on in buildings to break things up a bit.

Get some trim on those interior walls. Outdoor lighting, now it's birghtened looks really bland. Have you got it pointing straight down or are you using ambient light or something horrible like that?

Looks pretty damm good otherwise.

Nice improvment, but many of the outdoor textures looks too cartoony, undetailed. Maybe try PhilK's Morningstar wad?

If you want to have stars on the sky then you should make the rest of the sky much more black. It currently looks like some black-brown mix which is rather wierd for a sky.

i like the sky. Instead of the top rows of the buildings, make the streets more lit.

I agree with RD, it needs more light.

I have to say this keeps looking better and better all the time! You really improved your work and I like the result as of yet!

GJ!

bottom of the lightbeams is a bit screwed. Just cut off the bottom inch

actually looking a loy better, how do people know it;s a gay bar? will there be cod-pieces?

hah, cool. You need so much more contrast in the lighting for a club like that, the upper walls and ceiling should be pretty close to totally dark. As long as the floors are well lit, even if somebody stunts up there they'll still be lit as if they were standing on the floor.