[HL2 WIP] DM_SYCRAN

Looks cool, but a bit messed up. Seems like that you need a more consistent theme.

Very strange theme, and i mean that.

That corridor in the second pic is a total fucking mess. Truly horrible. The rest of it and that main room in particular, looks really good.

This map lacks a theme. BADLY.

first and last pic rock. Middle pics feel like they dont belong.

The first an last pics are very nice, the corridor is cluttered and looks icky....the 3 pic is pretty bland and unimaginative.

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That looks very strange and awful!

What's with the pipe in the second picture??

i like it, you just need to make your textures work better together though

Quote from hamst3r

The first an last pics are very nice, the corridor is cluttered and looks icky....the 3 pic is pretty bland and unimaginative.

Agreed, try to keep that theme throughout the map.

Like the others said, the first and last pic show something with potential, the rest of the pictures show a mixture of styles and that doesn't work for me. Also, i think that adding in some rocks could work out well, that would make the whole thing more interesting and less just 1 thing.

just need better textures.

First pic is very nice.

The lamps on the stairs in the last pic look strange, very hl1ish.

i think it looks cool.

but why are there a barrel and a crate on that container?

Spellbinder.

make the water less transparent

It looks strange, different but nice...

It looks a little disjointed. The open areas look rather nice, but as the others have said, that corridor looks pretty damn poor in comparison. Keep it up, I'm sure you can make it a lot better

Second picture needs work, the textures used do not match, the ones nearer to the floor seem perfectly clean, why they should be the grubiest, not the walls above it. The lights holder also have a to clean a texture for what seems to be a dirty theme you are going for.

The pipe is just uneeded aswell.

Its excellent work so far though, keep up the work.