[Portal 2] Broken Path

I played through your level and the puzzle is pretty neat. It took me a while to figure out, so good job on that!

I know these workshop levels don't necessarily focus on a story, but Portal 2 is a game about logic and the environment, which is by itself a small narrative, needs to reflect that. In the world of Portal 2 and Aperture science, test chambers are built to be solved by various subjects using the portal technology. Each test chamber has in it all the necessary elements to solve it. Your second test chamber does not and requires you to navigate back to the previous one in order to acquire an additional element. We also know that at the entrance/exist of each test chamber there is a material emancipation grill. That means that under normal circumstances, the test subjects would have never been able to solve the second chamber. Since we are currently in a point in time where the Aperture personnel is no longer present, we are able to navigate through one of the observation areas, avoid the material emancipation grill and solve the second chamber. You have two ways of fixing this issue. The first one, simplest solution, is to add a busted cube dispenser in the second chamber to avoid that minor plot hole. The second solution is to remove the observation area and compress the two chambers into a single one. Personally, I would compress the two chambers to get rid of the prop clutter from the observation area which would improve performance. Visually, the environment looks alright. There are some parts that are not particularly interesting to look at, but it does the job.

Overall, I like it - very well thought out. It has taken me a bit longer to finish stage 2 due to not actively playing Portal recently - but I didn't pay attention to the broken glass hint right from the start (despite the dead crow). And I like that idea, although I second the logical hole that Radu mentioned - if you implement it correctly (with the chamber design in mind) I find it quite nice to keep the two stages/chambers and also find something for the turrets that isn't just working anymore.

Nonetheless, you make good use of the Portal 2 content and it has a very authentic feeling true to the original.

It looks somewhat disappointing in terms of visuals, at least from what I see in the screenshots. One thing I'm immediately noticing is the lack of any actual chamber lighting other than the sun through the debris. There aren't really any glass light covers to make the lighting interesting at all, it's very bland. If it were me I'd have also have projected textures coming from the ceiling, to have crisp shadows.

The observation room also has some kinks. First off, observation rooms aren't usually ground level. Maybe instead of just walking into the broken window, you could have some fling into it. Swivel chairs are also usually used rather than the cheap regular BTS chairs. The lighting is quite uninteresting, and the relaxation container mural, 50s props, and oversized posters add to this strange feeling. Also, perhaps you could make use of light to create a better focus on the fact that you need to go through the broken glass. Another thing, you could have some blue light at the funnel to add realism.

One other thing I'd like to note is the tree in the middle of the ground. It's a bit peculiar, especially since there is no direct sunlight on it from what I can see.

Overall biggest thing is to make the lighting more interesting, and perhaps geometry as well. You didn't use any glass light strips, even though they are so central to these chambers and their lighting. Still, better than most of what's on the Workshop!

Sorry for this unorganized mess of feedback, but I hope it will help!

Quote from PhelgeNanker

20 hours ago, PhelgeNanker said: Radu, are there any parts in particular that you would like to see improved visually?

The problem is that your chambers lack depth due to the very basic lighting as @Stract pointed out.

Your first chamber could benefit from a similar light setup found in one of the official single player levels. You could also add more depth by expanding on the ceiling. Just two or three irregular shapes would go a long way.

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As for the second chamber, I don't really like the ramp leading to the door. You should lower the door to the platform level or add the standard aperture stairs.

I also think it would be better if the lighting was a bit different compared to the first chamber. Maybe something like this:

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One last thing, try to get rid of some props from the observation area and also increase the light value so that it stands out more to players. I also feel like that tree doesn't add to anything. It's cool, but the player spends 2-3 seconds in its area before never returning.

I look forward to your next iteration!