Rif_Raf (single player)

so you're a chick?

top screen is cool

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Is that bizarre sexuality code? Man, I'm behind the times...

first picture is pretty neat but that's all because of props, geometry isn't that good. rest is crap

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first picture is pretty neat but that's all because of props, geometry isn't that good. rest is crap

Why did you bother? You might as well of just posted pictures of birds...

Right, the basic impression I get from this is that it's very early so there's a loooong way to go before it will start to look like it 'should'. You should of waited really till you'd got some better stuff to show, but I'll guide you anyway.

First screen is prop central, this isn't such a bad thing on one side of the spectrum but it helps to have a bit of interesting geometry, from what I can see there, with the exception of theprops everything else looks flat and uninteresting, add a bit more detail on the ceiling and replace the texture on the left as it looks a bit too much like a ceiling texture to me.

The second screen looks kinda bare too, but it's not such a great picture anyway, you could of probably taken a better one that showed off the surrounding area a bit better.

If that 'thing' in screenshot five is meant to be an unfinished bridge then make it look like one, at present it looks like someone bolted down a makeshift piece of metal on top of a building! Look at some photos of bridges if you need a bit of reference, it's obvious to me that this area is far from even half-way done and thus you should really have waited till it was detailed more before showing us.

My 2$, good luck with it!

I like the First one. What is with the Lighting on the other Pics? Try to add some more athmospheric Lighting to make it more interesting. But hey, it could be a lot worser

im with duffy

that one combine in the third pic is chillin

its ugly.... but i dont care if its a really fun buggy map

To be honest, there isn't anything worth showing in those pics. It doesn't look like a serious map.

First maps can look good and play well if people actually put some effort in them.