r1ar Posted August 16, 2014 Report Posted August 16, 2014 Ho ho ho! I've just updated my portfolio, added last 5 maps from the work - antonbondar.ru Please feedback about maps or portfolio site P.S. I hate PHP and Java, only HTML. P.P.S. My original topic has been archived... mjens 1 Quote
Pampers Posted August 16, 2014 Report Posted August 16, 2014 Your host is extremely slow for me, no images are loading Quote
r1ar Posted August 16, 2014 Author Report Posted August 16, 2014 (edited) Hm... Moskow server, any page 2-5 seconds for me. Now site is moved to the Amsterdam server, i think it is be better. Try after one or two hours again, please. Edited August 16, 2014 by r1ar Quote
Pampers Posted August 16, 2014 Report Posted August 16, 2014 front page loaded right away now, but if I click any link i get Warning! Network traffic - 18 megabytes!Back Next Quote
r1ar Posted August 16, 2014 Author Report Posted August 16, 2014 Already moved to the Amsterdam. Quote
r1ar Posted August 17, 2014 Author Report Posted August 17, 2014 (edited) Pampers Images still not loading? Edited August 17, 2014 by r1ar Quote
Pampers Posted August 17, 2014 Report Posted August 17, 2014 I still get the network traffic thing on the two first entries, but the video and process pages loads fine Quote
r1ar Posted August 17, 2014 Author Report Posted August 17, 2014 oh... You need click on the "next" button. I made this warning for people, who have a paid network traffic - 3G, LTE or something. Quote
mjens Posted August 17, 2014 Report Posted August 17, 2014 Hi man, it looks really nice! Here are some of my thought about your portfolio: - The title banner is extremely big. It's unusual but not so bad I missed the menu bar with "Resume" etc. - Maybe you could provide an English version of your resume? - I didn't understand that network traffic warning, there's no need to put so many screens without captions or sense of what you want to show. It looks like a one location pictured from a lot of angles - I don't like that you've merged all your personal work levels onto one page. You could make a separate bar for each level and there would be no problem with the "network traffic" r1ar 1 Quote
r1ar Posted August 17, 2014 Author Report Posted August 17, 2014 (edited) seir Thanks for the feedback. - About resume. Today i'm not pretend for work in english talking studios. For many Moskow HR-managers resume in russian it is better. And not all art-directors/concept artists knows english. - About screenshots without a "sense". I think this screenshots shows my technique of detailing. I'm not an artist, i'm just man, who like to make a maps. - About portfolio pages. I specially merged all pages, cause it is hard to support 26 pages about my maps. When i need to change something in HTML on the all pages - i have a butthurt. And i won't to install CMS-systems for the web-site managment - they do not give full control over the code. I used "Joomla", and i don't like that experience. Edited August 17, 2014 by r1ar mjens 1 Quote
r1ar Posted August 23, 2014 Author Report Posted August 23, 2014 Portfolio moved on the Wordpress Now all maps have individual gallery and tags. ... also added one more map - "Dam". mjens 1 Quote
dux Posted August 23, 2014 Report Posted August 23, 2014 You should have your resume in Russian and English I think. The Background image should be removed and changed to a flat colour, I actually started to feel sick trying to look at your work because I couldn't focus properly on the images. Quote
Alf-Life Posted December 1, 2014 Report Posted December 1, 2014 Came to post the same "Russian/English resume, please" comment. When scrolling down and clicking on images, I found the pan to the top to load the image there a bit disruptive and I lost where I was. Other than that, nice work! r1ar 1 Quote
mjens Posted December 1, 2014 Report Posted December 1, 2014 Wow man, nice improvements. You did the job with WordPress! You have Professional/Personal Works but I miss more info in screenshot description. Could you include something like: Game, Engine, Release Date (if people will see that some stuff is from 2010 they will understand how your progress looked like). r1ar 1 Quote
r1ar Posted December 6, 2014 Author Report Posted December 6, 2014 (edited) Thank you guys for the feedback! Added description for the maps and team credits(need click "read more"). Project Affected Zone is closed by the investors! 14 people was fired! Video about the in-game world(russian only): In next 2 month i'll be a jobless... Edited December 6, 2014 by r1ar Quote
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