I feel like this stable area is a bit of a let down after all those great areas outside. Maybe try to make it more appealing and unique. Because on the other side i love the church from what i have seen. It might need some more lightning though. Overall it looks great so far. But there are many italianish maps out there. So try to make the map as unique as possible. May i ask how long you have been mapping?
Posts by Fabbo
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Great Work! I am not sure about the clothes line. I think it has not the same quality than the other details. Same for the wood pile on the last screen.
Wow the layout looks interesting. Cant wait to play it.
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Just registred to give you some feedback. The Outside areas already look great, especially the T-spawn area. It's a bit too much grey for my taste though. Maybe a af few more plants or grass on the walls? Inside it's similar, too grey and too plain. Despite that i like your theme a lot. I cant say too much about the gameplay, because i only played it a couple rounds with bots.
A couple of things i noticed.
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You get stuck on the edge (you have to jump a 2nd time). Prevents fluent movement imho.
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You cant move through there
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Kinda dark here. Bad readability.
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Prevents fluent movement.
Keep it going
