No, no no. The HDR is perfect, it gives it a weird feeling (in a good way)
1. I got out of the map on more than one account, you need player clips everywhere you think its possible.
2. Great texturing, and great close quarters combat
3. Wayyyyyy to small, you need to triple the size of this map.
4. Needs soundscapes, and ambient generics. There was no noise anywhere
5. Make a way better skybox, there was nothing but sky in the background
Other than these comments its a great start, KEEP GOING.