Thank you for your comments, i'll keep them in mind. I've already posted these pics on a few other forums, and all i got was either 'wow that's nice' or 'there's something wrong about it, i dunno what'. Neither of these helped me, so i'm really grateful for your feedback, at last i know what do i have to do next 
Unfortunately, there isn't much to show now, that's all i've managed to produce so far. I'm working too slow - there is school, work, bla-bla, i guess you've heard these excuses a million times already
