I'm a huge fan of criticism and feedback, so I'm going to post my work here over time in hopes of obviously improving my skill. I also like to try and take steps back from my own work and critique myself. I have some of my own crits on the image posted below, which I will mention. I'll be making those changes within the next few days. If you guys can add any suggestions I would greatly appreciate it.
[attachment=0]cave entrance 1 public.jpg[/attachment]
Author's Crits:
1. Change the water and water lighting from greenish to blueish.
2. Remove the broken dirt/rock path into the cave mouth and replace it with broken wooden plank/steps
3. The boggy water look isn't working; add more vegetation and start creating more of a marshland feel (its too empty right now?)
I know this is only one screenshot and most people would expect to find several shots or even a .cry file, but I can't do that at this time. My thread will eventually be a mix of shots like this and actual levels.
Thanks for your responses!
Zooch
