Pericolos0 Posted November 21, 2007 Report Posted November 21, 2007 Hey, I'm trying to teach myself some proper concept painting, so heres some stuff I did i could use some feedback on =). i'll be using this thread to post all my sketches and other stuff, I plan to do alot more. Anyways here goes the first batch SPACE TUBES An incredibly cheesy apocalyptic scene I might start detailing the last one, but I'm afraid I'll be spending too much of my time on that and not really learning much about sketching. Some feedback would be much appreciated, and also if you have any cool ideas for stuff i can draw (so i want be doing cheesy landscapes all the time), let me know . Quote
dux Posted November 21, 2007 Report Posted November 21, 2007 Sweet man, no crits from me. How about doin a castle in the sky or some shit. Quote
clayman Posted November 21, 2007 Report Posted November 21, 2007 really nice man but i would love to se more weather in there, clouds, fog n stuff Quote
Synthesizer Posted November 21, 2007 Report Posted November 21, 2007 Looking quite good. One thing that might help the space one is to give the planet in the background a light and dark side, to match the lighting on the space station, or perhaps it might bring it into focus too much. Great name for the space station. Quote
Sentura Posted November 21, 2007 Report Posted November 21, 2007 good job, seems you've made quite a jump since you showed this cylindric buildings last time... pretty awesome Quote
Pericolos0 Posted November 22, 2007 Author Report Posted November 22, 2007 Thanks for the comments everyone =). Here's another quick one from today, tried something with more weather after claymans suggestion: I think I should try to use some more color though, my color schemes are kinda cheap at the moment. Quote
Warby Posted November 22, 2007 Report Posted November 22, 2007 you has made huge strides forward Quote
e-freak Posted November 22, 2007 Report Posted November 22, 2007 keep your coloring : I love it! Quote
Felix Posted November 22, 2007 Report Posted November 22, 2007 i really like the first one ! nice work. Quote
Sentura Posted November 22, 2007 Report Posted November 22, 2007 i agree, keep the coloring. they look well saturated honestly, and go greatly with the images themselves. comment on the last one: too much reflectivity on the floor; it looks as if it's made of glass or is soaked in water. also, could you post the number of hours/minutes/seconds you put into each image? Quote
static07 Posted November 22, 2007 Report Posted November 22, 2007 i agree, keep the coloring. they look well saturated honestly, and go greatly with the images themselves. comment on the last one: too much reflectivity on the floor; it looks as if it's made of glass or is soaked in water. also, could you post the number of hours/minutes/seconds you put into each image? it's raining, the floor IS soaked in water Quote
Minos Posted November 22, 2007 Report Posted November 22, 2007 Nice concepts, I like the apocalyptic one Maybe you could use stronger/brighter greens in the rainy scene. I like the color scheme but the bar sign looks a bit "dark", if you get what I mean. Suggestions for themes: - A couple of desaturated decayed buildings on a foggy morning (like the typical london weather). Think of stalker (the movie, not the game). - an f-zero race - a rainforest (think of king kong) - hurg Keep up the good work bramster. Quote
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