dm_moroes - my contest map

[El Moroes]

Hi all, I'm happy to present you my last map made for a contest and called dm_moroes (mmm yes, it's called like that because it's the official name of the contest).

We had to build our map in one week around two words which were "Nature" and "Technology"... so here mine work.

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Oh and yes, it was on Mapping-Area and the map is build for 8 players!

It's a beta, so I can continue it if I want

Mmmh and here the url to download it :

dm_moroes

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Looks pretty! ^^

[FrieChamp]

Sorry for straight honesty - the treehouse isn't too bad at all (except for the wooden corners in the ceiling UGH!), but just throwing in Warby's dystopia props in there doesn't make it a good nature-technology symbiosis

What is the fiction behind the level?

[Mazy]

Hmmm yeah, looks good but yeah, that robo spider doesn't really look like it belongs there, hmmh.

[insta]

The technology part seems like a bit of an afterthought, since it's just Warbys models scattered around the map. Also, in the greenhouse the texture scaling on the windows is a bit wacky, you could use a plain glass texture and then do the frames with brushes.

Also, I don't like the large shrubbery in the middle of the gameplay area, since bastard players are likely to hide in there and nail you with a crossbow when you walk past

[Zacker]

Friechamp and the other replies pretty much nailed it. Overall it looks ok, especially the greenhouse, but it feels an a lot like a premade map with warby's models smacked in.

[El Moroes]

Thanks for your critics and I prefer have the straight honesty of these!

I'll made a b2, but later and I'll try to make a beter integration of these mdls

[Rick_D]

where are those foliage models from?

[Warby]

i agree with everyone my models don't go well with the rest (its a though topic/task i might add here )

-but removing my props is the wrong approach clearly

-replace everything BUT my props i SAY

[RA7]

SWEET!!!! Will add mirror asap

[Bic-B@ll]

needs more pauly shore

[Psy]

Looks pretty nice imo but the textures look really stretched.

[El Moroes]

I'll make a second version wich will be more realised!

Thanks for comments!

[sk3tch]

Screenshot 2 the trees look a little dark but Looks sweet!