El Moroes Posted July 12, 2007 Report Share Posted July 12, 2007 As Minotauro has made, I present you my online portfolio... I don't really know if it's good to present my works...because I must contact some game companies for a training of 3 months and I would like have your critics or comments before that I begin to contact them. Thanks in advance Here : http://www.bidoulmarc.be Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hourences Posted July 12, 2007 Report Share Posted July 12, 2007 Dont say Hi in every newspost you make For the most pro portfolio I wouldnt include any news at all, or in a very minimalistic way. Stick to the point, news is kind of irrelevant. I dont know what kind of position you will be applying for, but if you intend to be a level design intern Id give your levels much more attention. You dont come across like a level designer to me right now because the levels are dumped at the bottom of the page in between all kinds of other stuff. It doesnt really feel important. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zacker Posted July 12, 2007 Report Share Posted July 12, 2007 Something is wrong here, you call it a portfolio and yet the frontpage is some kind of news or blog page. I also see that you have models and level design on one page, I would really split that up into two seperate pages. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quakis Posted July 12, 2007 Report Share Posted July 12, 2007 I have to agree with the news as Hourences says. Another thing I can pick out is the orange links on the banner, they seem to blur too much with that colour, lacks a contrast for those to stick out since that's where you want to direct people to, those pages. Possibly too small as well. I always find that portfolio's that have a few example screenshots of what you have on your site on the front page can be a nice introduction what to expect. You could replace the news page with that and a little introduction. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Moroes Posted July 12, 2007 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2007 Okay, thanks I understand! Well I'll make some change to make that better! :roll: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Psy Posted July 12, 2007 Report Share Posted July 12, 2007 You need to categorise each level! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minos Posted July 12, 2007 Report Share Posted July 12, 2007 I have seen quite a few portfolios and I always liked the one-paged ones, because it's easier and quicker to navigate. Your portfolio is good (as in quality of work) but I think you should focus on the area you want to work on. If it's level design than remove all the other random works (or create a separate page for them, like "assorted works") and put level design related stuff in relevance. And as hourences already pointed out, remove the news posts since they are distracting and add nothing to a good portfolio. In fact I think you should keep this as your personal site/blog and create a separate portfolio. One paged portfolios I can remember now: http://www.philipk.net (blaz) http://cmdstud.khlim.be/~beulaers/portfolio/ (peris) http://mazy.net/portfolio (mazy) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rick_D Posted July 12, 2007 Report Share Posted July 12, 2007 24.06.2007 • News Hi all, How are you? I hope you are all like me; just happy! My exams are finished and as you'll can see, there are new works in the 2D panel and also in the 3D panel. You'll can see screens of my exams, new animation, new sketches, and other... So I wish you a good visit! ... 07.05.2007 • News Hi everyone, Today I've put some new works on my port-folio. You can find them in the 3D parts. As you can see, these models are composed with a Velociraptor, two Gas Pump and a Mushroom. I'll post the others another day. See you later. ... 13.04.2007 • News Hi everybody, Here a short new for big update! As you can see, all the design is changed! It is more modern and more friendly! Mmmh it's all. Have a good day. ... 08.04.2007 • News Hi all, how are you? Well here are the news. First I have made a better navigation between the works on the 2D and the 3D menu. After I have changed the dimension of the pics for a better loading. And it's all. Have a good day and see you later. ... 31.03.2007 • First News Hi everyone and welcome on my new port-folio. Not a big website but it is just what it is necessary. All parts are finished and are waiting your visit. So I wish you a good day. lol that's so chirpy it's annoying :S What do you mean by "mod" mod in maya - made in maya? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minos Posted July 12, 2007 Report Share Posted July 12, 2007 "Modeled" I suppose. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Moroes Posted July 12, 2007 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2007 Okay okay ! I'll make that... Still thanks for your critics, it help me a lot! And mod, yes it's made (french - mod - modélisation (bad for english, sorry)). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rick_D Posted July 12, 2007 Report Share Posted July 12, 2007 ah I see Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Moroes Posted July 25, 2007 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2007 Hi Well after a lot of work around my portfolio, I'm happy to present you the new design! Somethings will come later but the big parts of my work are presented! I want to say a big thank you to Nyko18 for his help in the HTML code! I hope it's better! Portfolio Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FMPONE Posted July 25, 2007 Report Share Posted July 25, 2007 sup moroes :0 portfolio looks good. I don't think I ever told you your arctic map inspired my dod stuff, I always thought it was one of the most under-appreciated maps I ever saw and still your best u rock Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minos Posted July 25, 2007 Report Share Posted July 25, 2007 Looks a lot better now moroes What mod is that arctic_airport map for by the way ? It looks damn awesome! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SixThree Posted July 25, 2007 Report Share Posted July 25, 2007 Unreal 3? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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