Deralia

[Ewok]

Time to pimp updated shots again. Same areas as usual just with improvements. Since this is a WIP forum.

LOOK the litt0l windows are alit with life!!!! Yeah, more ambience and more detail. You can see the side street grocers dig on the street there.

It's still actually brighter in-game, screen capturing is a little f0rked. Good enuff though ~

- Ewok

[insta]

Still doesn't look quite like a little village. Everything is so 90 degrees and flat. Try to break it up a bit more, use odd angles for houses, height differences and so on.

[Ewok]

To be frank, that's because it's meant to be a city. Not a little village. I wouldn't put a beacon and various other things if it was meant to be a small village, roads would be more narrrow too.

This is more of a well structured, human capitol. Not something that's really grownen from a couple plebs building rubbish like squatters. There are actually height differences, but most things follow an actual floor size, ie. floors are usually a standard size. So if something is tall, it's most likely 2 - 3 floors high. To keep it realistic, since this is meant to be a quite well built civilization.

As for the whole 90 degree thing, I've take that in consideration, probably do that to some of the buildings (not many) just to help pull off an effect. Thanks for the advice.

- Ewok

[curman]

I love the MS mod, I'm glad someones comming up with some new stuff..

I think the problem is your town is too spread out..

I'm not staying "steal" but try to be influenced by Sa74n map De_Ungarn and make it a little more tidy and together.

Great work none the less.

[Ewok]

I can try that more compact effect, which would require quite abit of shuffling and some serious brush movement, but it wasn't kinda what I was going for in this map. The road fits wagons to go both ways, kinda essential I think. Very comfortable size for many players to run around togther, something like Ungarn I don't see working here. To me the roads feel quite comfortable. I could be wrong, so guess it's up to what other people say. But remember this is meant to be a capitol. More City or Town than Village. And thanks heh.

- Ewok

[Evert]

Doesn't have the "capitol" look over it really.

Even so, the buildings look old, cities aren't often built to become a capitol, they foten start with something smaller, and this looks like that old part of the town.

It look like some sort of scene for a movie to be honest, add more things that make it look like people actually live in it.

Add cables from roofes, between eachother, from poles.

Cables rock.

[Grin]

Looks too tidy and clean, doesn't have the feeling of a city at all, looks like a bunch of warehouses. Just doesn't have the warm feeling of somebody living there man, get more living lightning and some trash on the streets.

Oh, and why the fireplace is outside in this house?

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[Taylor]

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