teeluu Posted May 21, 2007 Report Posted May 21, 2007 Ok, so i could've fix and add nice bunch of stuff with this but i ran out of time, had to get this done for school i'm applying to. I gave some contrast with photoshop, i think it's acceptable with work like this. Palm model made by philipk. Original images: Image 1 Image 2 Image 3 Quote
Minos Posted May 21, 2007 Report Posted May 21, 2007 I think it looks good, hope you get the job mate. Quote
Evert Posted May 21, 2007 Report Posted May 21, 2007 I think it lacks real depth, color and something that makes it stand out tbh. Quote
teeluu Posted May 21, 2007 Author Report Posted May 21, 2007 Good luck with the final tests Thanks, i need it, i suck at drawing Quote
Zacker Posted May 21, 2007 Report Posted May 21, 2007 I am not fond of the palm you have chosen, the leaf textures are heavily oversharpened. Quote
Defrag Posted May 21, 2007 Report Posted May 21, 2007 The huge pavement chunks are a touch weird looking and I think the colour is a little too orange & saturated, but other than that, it's some nice work Quote
Erratic Posted May 21, 2007 Report Posted May 21, 2007 Maybe some really bright white lights in the balconies and windows would make the seen 'pop' out a bit more? Quote
Psy Posted May 22, 2007 Report Posted May 22, 2007 There needs to be more detail in the background and you could also add some tall buildings behind the current buildings to create a more "city" feel to it. Quote
teeluu Posted May 22, 2007 Author Report Posted May 22, 2007 Thanks for the c&c It lacks color, true, maybe i would've drop the fog value a lot if i just had the time. Could've added more lights on balconies too, lazyness. Maybe i'll update this one day, i've had enough of it for now I am not fond of the palm you have chosen, the leaf textures are heavily oversharpened. PhilipK made them, i believe they're just fine, maybe they got screwed up when i added contrast with ps or when i saved it as jpg There needs to be more detail in the background and you could also add some tall buildings behind the current buildings to create a more "city" feel to it. Well yeah, i was supposed to model mosque and that kinda stuff there but like i said, run out of time. Iraq looks kinda boring tho, at least lot of places of sadr city is just boring as shit Quote
Steppenwolf Posted May 22, 2007 Report Posted May 22, 2007 Let me tell you something from my 3 years experience of iraq mapping. To get the realistic look right add SHITLOADS of advertisement signs and decals to the map. everywhere on rooftops, on walls, hanging over the streets etc. Also add shitloads of cables hanging from everywhere even places that seem to be totaly ridiculous for western standarts. Quote
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