blackdahlia Posted January 12, 2007 Report Posted January 12, 2007 hey guys this is my first map i did for a level design class assignment i had some help from my buddy dark on here, this is still a WIP Quote
twiz Posted January 12, 2007 Report Posted January 12, 2007 Looks good, but get some displacement maps goin! The road, the sidewalks, everything - they need some variation. http://www.mapcore.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=4842 hessi's de_corse for inspiration Quote
JeanPaul Posted January 13, 2007 Report Posted January 13, 2007 Turn up your ambient brightness. Quote
blackdahlia Posted January 13, 2007 Author Report Posted January 13, 2007 Turn up your ambient brightness. will do thanks Quote
Erratic Posted January 13, 2007 Report Posted January 13, 2007 The sidewalks could use some sort of trim to create some definition. Right now it's a little too bare. Also the fog seems a little out of place. It doesn't match the skybox and kinda throws off the atmosphere. Maybe if it was thinner and more of a whitish/grey color it would fit better. Looks like a fine start otherwise. Quote
Grinwhrl Posted January 13, 2007 Report Posted January 13, 2007 Looks like shit and your name is Kendal! HAHAHA. Welcome to Mapcore bud! I'm glad you posted your map from class. You will get some good crits here. Quote
JamesL Posted January 13, 2007 Report Posted January 13, 2007 If the class is level design then I should imagine the layout will be more important than the look. How about posting up an overview of the routes? Quote
RA7 Posted January 13, 2007 Report Posted January 13, 2007 The sidewalk looks too blocky, and it needs sum more details. Ps can u go into the houses? The rest looks like solid start. Quote
FrieChamp Posted January 13, 2007 Report Posted January 13, 2007 Why are the street lamps on when it's day Quote
blackdahlia Posted January 13, 2007 Author Report Posted January 13, 2007 Why are the street lamps on when it's day i just took the models right out of the browser, im not sure if theres anything i can do about the light in them i think its just kinda like that, maybe i'll change the model so they arent lit thanks Quote
Warby Posted January 13, 2007 Report Posted January 13, 2007 the shadows are are way too dark for a sky that bright Quote
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