DM_Marden (Lots of pics)

[Rick_D]

(Lots of pics) <- that all look the same <3

[Tarky]

Looks pretty cool.

Out of curosity, what made you choose the name DM_Marden?

Marden is my surname you see, and I have seldom ever seen it in use elsewhere.

[Skjalg]

It looks good, but not good enough, I have a few issues, especially lightingwise. You really should read Hourences free pdf on Lighting, I think you can snag a few good bits from there. Especially read up on making lights that doesnt have a source (where does that greenish light come from?) And making them have a realistic size compared to the source (twiz picture shows what Im talking about, the spotlight doesnt even make sense).

It looks 90%! You just lack the extra 10, keep it up!

[MJ]

who cares where the green light comes from. It looks cool and gives it uniqueness. Some models of statutes would make it awesome.

[JeanPaul]

There are an endless amount if incredible things you could do with the 3d skybox in this map.

[Skjalg]

who cares where the green light comes from. It looks cool and gives it uniqueness. Some models of statutes would make it awesome.

I just said I did and that color combination isnt really that unique.

[OnboardError]

pretty nice bro good job.

[Zacker]

The style is nice and so is the textures, but it's really too simple overall imo. I said it in your other thread and I will say it again. Your arches are nice, but except for those there is not much detail in this map.

[hydeph]

your lights emit light from nothing, there's no bulb or fixture or anything, just a square emitting light....

[Slackiller]

looks nice and clean

[spine]

Nice work Oohgy!

I did not know you had the mapping skils, great!

[Ooghijmiqtxxa]

Thanks for the crits guys.

The light sources are those blocks because they have the magical property of magic! I was just playing around with it and I thought that would be a good idea to try to keep the symbol thing going.

I agree, the brush work is pretty simple. I'll make sure to give my next map more detail and work on the lighting more. Again, thanks for all the crits and I'm glad some of you like it. I'll take all this good advice and put it towards the next map.

[Rick_D]

If you haven't released it for download, why not take the time to finish the map with the great suggestions people have given you?

If it's a magic light, make the magic more apparent, some floating sprites etc. Don't just give up, but keep at it until you have something spotlight quality, please..