Something I was doing for BMS awhile back.

[OnboardError]

Yea tried to get on the team but they didn't take... Here's the shots... textures need work IMO. Re-make of c2a3

[Zacker]

Did the original HL level have a huge transformer in the ceiling?

[OnboardError]

Well the rail car flew off the tracks and into this area for no reason. I made it so the car is traveling and a bomb hitts on the surface and shakes the area it falls knocking it down and the train derails... just trying to make it a little better then the orginal.

[PhilipK]

It has potential. As you said it could use some work on the textures and especially try to get in some variation with either decals, more textures or other details on the walls.

[atrocity]

I do think it looks good, there are some thing you should tweak. I am not that good of a texture artist my self, but you could use some variation in the metal. Even if you brokw it up bottom part concrete and the top part metal, it could work. I do like how you used a transformer to do that, pretty cool idea.

[OnboardError]

textures would be the first to go if i got on the team.

[Minos]

Not bad. Lighting needs a lot of work imo

[Markus]

Not bad. Lighting needs a lot of work imo

[Dodger]

Looks interesting as a map.

The lighting needs more work and the architecture perhaps in some parts of the map. Try to add more sprites for example to the generator.