de_industrial *now with working pics*

[OnboardError]

The name is temp.. till I can come up with a good one.

The map is very large and is about 40% done.

a few of the shots here are wip empty areas and such that still have not under gone detailing and such... take a peek. no cube maps in these shots sorry having a small issue. I stopped work on this a age ago and think its total crap now... MY skill from this project has gone up. see asylum, but yea thought id show anyhow.

[Markus]

Images are broken.

[e-freak]

no but his host is not happy about image linking. get those pics on imageshack.us

[Grinwhrl]

I dont see anything

[Meotwister]

Images are broken.

weeeee...

[Markus]

http://www.filebunker.net/a/albums/userpics/11%7E1.jpg

http://www.filebunker.net/a/albums/userpics/12%7E1.jpg

http://www.filebunker.net/a/albums/userpics/13%7E0.jpg

http://www.filebunker.net/a/albums/userpics/14%7E0.jpg

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http://www.filebunker.net/a/albums/userpics/10%7E0.jpg

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http://www.filebunker.net/a/albums/userpics/5%7E1.jpg

Just open those links. Anyway, now that I've had a chance to look at it, I love the brush and texture work. My only gripe would be the lack of overlays/decals and props. Some areas are littered with props while other areas there isn't a single one to be found. Add some crack decals to the outside floors, as judging from the buildings themselves, the area has been in use for a while. It'd give it more character and add to the realism factor. Light posts, telephone poles, garbage cans, and so forth also wouldn't hurt. The lighting is so-so. With cloud-cover as that you wouldn't tend to see such strong shadows, so lighten them up a bit. Otherwise, good work! I can't wait to see more! Also, if you aren't going to complete it, I'd love to take a gander at it and see what I can come up with, as it'd be a shame to see this sent to the scrap book.

[RA7]

Images are broken.

weeeee...

Still FORBIDDEN

[Markus]

Copy + paste, or click it and press enter in the address bar.

[OnboardError]

hey im really sorry guys ill have my first post fixed for tommorrow

[RA7]

YAY!!

[⌐■_■]

this is damn cruel..

[OnboardError]

For now check here: http://www.hl2world.com/bbs/wip-deindus ... industrial

[ReNo]

All broken for me there too mate

[⌐■_■]

ok,

architecture is at some places pretty dull (first exterior pics), lightning is also pretty blend. interiors however are nice!

and as Ilr says:

cl_drawhud 0

r_drawviewmodel 0

(just a tip)

my suggestion would be to try and add a little contrast to the whole scene with some more interesting lighting and to make the building more appealing by adding a bit more detail and depth to them (exterior part). The streets need a little more props and since its an industrial map, you might want to add more vehicles and adds.

succes!

oh, and i know this is a wip, but i assume you want comments on this so here you go

[OnboardError]

ok,

architecture is at some places pretty dull (first exterior pics), lightning is also pretty blend. interiors however are nice!

and as Ilr says:

cl_drawhud 0

r_drawviewmodel 0

(just a tip)

my suggestion would be to try and add a little contrast to the whole scene with some more interesting lighting and to make the building more appealing by adding a bit more detail and depth to them (exterior part). The streets need a little more props and since its an industrial map, you might want to add more vehicles and adds.

succes!

oh, and i know this is a wip, but i assume you want comments on this so here you go

yepp love feedback My skill level was much lower when I was working on this (see asylum for the now) but I think I might redo it.