NightWolf Posted October 7, 2006 Report Share Posted October 7, 2006 I have had this posted at interlopers for a long while now so I thought I might post it here for some more constructive criticism. I haven't worked on this map in ages and it is still far from done, anyways here is the layout and a screen shot. Final Layout: This would be my latest screen shot from today, I think this is done for the most part. I'm not showing the rest of the screens because those parts of the map are not done or worth showing. Also all the textures are custom made by the talented evillair at http://www.evillair.net the only texture that is custom and made by me is the door texture. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minos Posted October 7, 2006 Report Share Posted October 7, 2006 That looks damn hot! I'm not sure about the layout though... it looks a bit oversized. It also seems to be kinda linear in some areas, which is not good for a dm map. Just my first impressions Keep it up anyways. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bic-B@ll Posted October 7, 2006 Report Share Posted October 7, 2006 looks super awesome, you might want to throw in some other shades of gray in there and a bit more color Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrieChamp Posted October 7, 2006 Report Share Posted October 7, 2006 That is a big level Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hourences Posted October 7, 2006 Report Share Posted October 7, 2006 It does look huge. Youre not making it easy on yourself.. Lighting could use less ambient and more contrast, its a bit washed out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhilipK Posted October 7, 2006 Report Share Posted October 7, 2006 ooh neato start Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dux Posted October 7, 2006 Report Share Posted October 7, 2006 Nice start to it mate but as mentioned you really aren't doing yourself many favours with the size of that layout. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hamst3r Posted October 7, 2006 Report Share Posted October 7, 2006 Awesome work. I love the geometry and texture use, but I would try to add a bit more color to the lighiting; mabey some blue, oragne or red highlights, just to spice things up a bit. Also I agree with what the others have said about the layout, great start though. Keep it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightWolf Posted October 7, 2006 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2006 Thanks for all the comments so far. The map is going to be big but things are much scaled down than what you see on the layout. I plan on making some custom light models later so I can match the lights more with the theme. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belgarion Posted October 7, 2006 Report Share Posted October 7, 2006 I think it looks great. I don't mind the ambient lighting either. I think we put too much emphasis on contrasted lighting and forget that sometimes ambient lighting is easier to look at. The one thing i did notice about it though, is that the pipe up there is not quite lit correctly. the whole thing is rather bright. Darkening it up by moving the light origin is probably all you need. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJ Posted October 7, 2006 Report Share Posted October 7, 2006 man all this work for a dm map? Damn Use this for a mod Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phobos Posted October 10, 2006 Report Share Posted October 10, 2006 I don't care how it looks. I think the name is fabulous. ps. post more pics soon. It looks hawt. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minos Posted October 10, 2006 Report Share Posted October 10, 2006 I don't care how it looks. I think the name is fabulous. lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luks Posted January 21, 2007 Report Share Posted January 21, 2007 Ver nice work man, i like the ambience. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FMPONE Posted February 4, 2007 Report Share Posted February 4, 2007 Any more on this? I love it :3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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