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hello there! i'm still not that experienced, so i'll be pleased with any kind of feedback, thanks.

(i'm going to post additional artwork in this topic later, so it may be worthwile to scroll down...)

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i made these for my girlfriend, she was very happy about them (she loves winnie pooh). the second one is pure photoshop, while the first one got it's winnie from disney...

http://www.hogibear.de/img/gallery/planschen.png < winnie

http://www.hogibear.de/img/gallery/planet.png < a planet

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I apologize for my original rude post that was not constructive, they seem to be something you spent time on, and perhaps if i were a girl they'd be more down my alley, good luck with whatever they were used for.

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it pays off, i can tell you...

hmm.. i think i have to specify: i'm not really pleased with any imaginable kind of feedback. i'd like to slightly move the focus on technical aspects.

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Hey Hogi, didn't expect you'd sign up here. (yes, i actually know this guy in person. He's a friend of my brother :o)

I think you should kill the lensflare, and make the planet look a tad more ....planet-like... right now it's just like an almost metallic sphere with clouds... doesn't really look like a planet at all.. then again, I doubt your girlfriend would care.

As for the first one, I think that one's fine as it is... Maybe give more definition to the waves around the poo bear~

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