vault floor render *updated*

[General Vivi]

Hey guys i was working on this yesterday . its a render scene. i took out the gun that was placed in the bottom left becaus it wasn't mine but i will eventually learn to model guns and make my own .

here is render

and here is wireframe

*notes* the floor texture isn't mine but i made a bump map for it. and the bullets arnt mine. everything else is mine ^^ *notes*

comments and crits are welcome.

[Ginger Lord]

Bullets are easy to make.

Looks good so far.

[KoKo5oVaR]

looks good viv, maybe the specularity on the bullets is a bit too strong and the floor too blurry ?

And you did you used HDR to render it ? looks like

[General Vivi]

na no hdr here. still working on the scene tho.

[Section_Ei8ht]

nice!

[Squirrelly]

Why does the $500 bill say $300?

[Meotwister]

I like it. Is it like something from history? I ask because the $500 bill was not printed after 1945 and officially discontinued in the 60s.

oh and fix the 'money bags'

Why does the $500 bill say $300?

what?

[Squirrelly]

On the front bill, the $20,000 fold, it has $500 on the corners but in the center in big letters it has "300". Look at the other bills, they are represented properly.

[Nazul]

On the front bill, the $20,000 fold, it has $500 on the corners but in the center in big letters it has "300". Look at the other bills, they are represented properly.

well , if you tilt your head to the left you see 300 , and to the right your see 500... ( //or vice versa ) , or jsut blink a couple of times

[Meotwister]

yeah, I saw it first as a 500 then you said it said 300 so i looked and saw 300 but then it went back to 500

theres a very thin line that makes it a five.

[Zacker]

Nice work, the floor texture seems to be a little low res/blurry though. And yep, that 300/500 number is wierd:D

[General Vivi]

i made a 360 render. I dont know how to controle the speed that the camera goes just yet so it goes kinda fast. The render took 4hrs to do .

http://www.generalvivi.lawgiver.us/imag ... render.avi

p.s. thanks for all the comments and i know the 500/300 thing is wierd . ill try and fix it . its just because of the angle you have to tilt your head a certain way my gf pointed it out to me.

[Nazul]

i said that.. grr

there's something I don't get, I guess it's a crime scene right ? so why are there bullets instead of only shells ? and how come the bullets are standing upwards ? and even 2 on a stack of money . kinda weird

**movie looks phenomenal btw

[von*ferret]

scale your keyframes up in the timeline to control the camera. I'm sure there is a way to control how fast it progresses in the path. However the real way to do it is to add frames.

[Dodger]

ey it looks to smooth why don't you just add some cool layer to it?

there is no gun..'

make blood on the gun that will make it look awsome