insta Posted March 8, 2006 Report Posted March 8, 2006 Wow, very nice stuff. The stair-room could be spruced up a bit with decals or more detailed lighting, but otherwise great. Quote
OrnateBaboon Posted March 8, 2006 Author Report Posted March 8, 2006 Cheers Fruchtzwerg. Absolutely Insta. Different textures, big Italian style decals, broken stairs, wires on the lights, a fuse box, rubbish on the stairs, leaves, sprites, hdr and anything else that would fit. Quote
SKULLHOZER Posted March 10, 2006 Report Posted March 10, 2006 This map looks great; I especially like the little details like the construction on the one building’s roof. Quote
OrnateBaboon Posted March 14, 2006 Author Report Posted March 14, 2006 Thanks Skullhozer. Some more pics. Quote
WD Posted March 14, 2006 Report Posted March 14, 2006 Those trees are on the wrong season they should have yellow leaves Quote
von*ferret Posted March 14, 2006 Report Posted March 14, 2006 sexy. maybe bevel some of the outside building edges. Would help the overall feel of the levels more by taking away the cube like feel without removing the architectural element. Quote
Zacker Posted March 14, 2006 Report Posted March 14, 2006 Fence on the right in the last pic of your first post doesn't fit in. Quote
Meotwister Posted March 14, 2006 Report Posted March 14, 2006 yeah your indoors are great, but the exteriors could use a bit of work, like zacker said I dont think chain link fences fit in there. You could try making your roofs displacements to break up the square/cube feeling. Keep it up man it just keeps gettin better. Quote
OrnateBaboon Posted March 15, 2006 Author Report Posted March 15, 2006 WhiteDevil - are you talking about how there should be yellow leaves on the trees themselves or the ones that are already on the floor? von*ferret - I agree. All of the buildings in the map are blocky at the moment. When I am happy with the shape of them and the way they fit together, I will angle the corners, or add extra geometry to get rid of the cube like feel. Zacker - will remove fences. Make no snse being there whatsoever! Meotwister - will definitely add displaced roofs when I am happy with the buildings. They make a huuuge difference. The first lot of pics are quite rough, and I am going to rebuild lots of the area. Looks a bit too old engine in places. Quote
Taylor Swift Posted March 15, 2006 Report Posted March 15, 2006 WhiteDevil - are you talking about how there should be yellow leaves on the trees themselves or the ones that are already on the floor? He means just regular ordinary tree models need a new change from green leaves to yellow to math the leaves under the tree Quote
OrnateBaboon Posted March 15, 2006 Author Report Posted March 15, 2006 Ahhh I see. So this will mean changing the colour of the trees skin. But don't some leaves go yellow before brown? I don't really know, but if this is a definite problem, changing the skin colour would be easy enough. Quote
atrocity Posted March 15, 2006 Report Posted March 15, 2006 Excellent lookign level, the things I would adress are the few present consistancy issues. You have some nice architecture and some excellent level work, but the trashcans look a little out of place, and the crate on the street is kind of odd, doesn;t seem to serve any direct purpose. Some other things though very minor but kind of weird you have trees with nice green leaves but the the ground has orange ones laying all around. I know that may not be something you can directly fix but I think militia's trees might have reddish orangish leaves? The lamp at the top of the small hallway is upside down, that looks pretty odd also. keep up the great work. Quote
OrnateBaboon Posted March 20, 2006 Author Report Posted March 20, 2006 Cheers atrocity. I added the trashcan becaause it looks modern. I would like to date the map, so that it looks as though it is taking place in the present day. Could also change the colour of the skin on the tree to match the leaves if it is an issue. Lamp definitely looks odd! Some pics of inaccesable areas. I was wondering if anyone had any good ideas about things that could be added into these areas. There are quite a few of them, so I don't want to keep repeating myself. All ideas are welcome. Quote
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