von*ferret Posted February 14, 2006 Report Share Posted February 14, 2006 WIP gotta finish a lot of crap still =( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grinwhrl Posted February 14, 2006 Report Share Posted February 14, 2006 looking great. I see you changed the building from an L to a more barn style look. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
von*ferret Posted February 14, 2006 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2006 yeah, I modeled garage doors and have more refinery stuff on the right side along with silo like things. But this render's ambient occlusion took for ever so I'll update later. btw sorry for the huge file size, I forgot to resize lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RD Posted February 14, 2006 Report Share Posted February 14, 2006 but why is it in russia? with palmtrees? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skjalg Posted February 14, 2006 Report Share Posted February 14, 2006 A russian sign does not mean its in russia It just means that its on russia-occupied territory btw, it looks awesome.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KoKo5oVaR Posted February 14, 2006 Report Share Posted February 14, 2006 The roof of the building on the right needs more subdivisions in my opinion, also your lighting doesn't focus the eye on the bunker it's a bit too dark. That's the only things i can spot, everything else is really good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Section_Ei8ht Posted February 14, 2006 Report Share Posted February 14, 2006 looks like something out of doom 3. Not sure if thats good or bad. I like it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyanideCotdPnuts Posted February 14, 2006 Report Share Posted February 14, 2006 In my opinion,. you need more wear and tear on your buildings. Too clean cut. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhilipK Posted February 15, 2006 Report Share Posted February 15, 2006 Looking really good so far fetter. I especially like the whole pipe structure. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minos Posted February 15, 2006 Report Share Posted February 15, 2006 Nice progress ferret! But if you are aiming at making it look real you should smooth out those edges, specially on the roofs. Besides that, the street texture looks a bit too blurry, it'd be neat if you make a high-res street texture with cracks and wet spots (also, some specular on the windows and on the pipes wouldn't hurt at all) Keep it up m8! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
von*ferret Posted February 15, 2006 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2006 updated Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
insta Posted February 15, 2006 Report Share Posted February 15, 2006 The lighting is very cool, but I'm not sure about that camo-net over the bunker. It's a concrete bunker in the middle of a concrete landscape, so I don't think it would fool any attackers. Also, the outlining rope looks very rigid. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
von*ferret Posted February 15, 2006 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2006 Well you're not very fun! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minos Posted February 15, 2006 Report Share Posted February 15, 2006 ah awesome stuff ferret! I agree with insta about the camo-net though, it looks really out of place. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kleinluka Posted February 16, 2006 Report Share Posted February 16, 2006 The lighting is very cool, but I'm not sure about that camo-net over the bunker. It's a concrete bunker in the middle of a concrete landscape, so I don't think it would fool any attackers. Also, the outlining rope looks very rigid. I agree, I couldn't even tell what the black line was until insta brought up "outlining rope". I'd remove the camo netting. You need a few big cylindrical chimneys in the back with black smoke rising up from them (greyish concrete with red stripes on it would be cool) Looks pretty cool so far, and yeah- smoothen out the roof a bit. A few more subdivisions won't hurt GJ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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