The random model thread!

[entity]

I think the ribcage might be too low and the bottom area of the pecs should be rounder. You also might not need that many edges if you're going for a game model, remember that it's best to keep the edges evenly spaced. I can see this in the abs section, where you could probably merge the middle edges for a cleaner topology.

The legs also look too bent towards each other, around the kneecap.

[Xadeko]

Thanks entity,

Ill be fixing those point's.

Why those legs are so bend are because of the reference picture i use, maybe i should replace it with another.

And those edges, i have never knew that it's better to keep them evenly spaced, why is that?

[entity]

I think it's mostly for deformation and smoothing. I've also heard that uv's work better too. The back of your model is a good example of good topology

[socratesomega]

Ignore the ear =].

[Dennispls]

that head looks out of proportions

its not bad though dont get me wrong but the size of things bother me

[Sindwiller]

That looks very nice to me. Actually, my first thought was "and again a shitty hair shader...". Then i saw, that the hair is actually alpha mapped. Nice work!

And, the proportions are ok IMHO. Or, you never saw a east european or a asian?

Wfr, Sindwiller

[TeddyBear]

That looks very nice to me. Actually, my first thought was "and again a shitty hair shader...". Then i saw, that the hair is actually alpha mapped. Nice work!

And, the proportions are ok IMHO. Or, you never saw a east european or a asian?

Wfr, Sindwiller

If your initial reaction was that it was a "shitty" shader, why did you suddenly think it was good looking just because it was modeled? :wink:

Anyways, good start, I like it. Work on his cheeks!

[socratesomega]

Thanks for the crits, Fixed some anatomy errors.

[Spellbinder]

Im not the one coming with critism since you are about 100% better then me, but what did you do to his ear?

[Meotwister]

Ignore the ear =].

*ahem*

nice man, I think the proportions are good. my initial reaction was more of an oh cool, cause I've never seen an asian (from the orient) person modeled.

that ear freaked me out still

[Spellbinder]

Oh ok, didnt see that.

[Sindwiller]

That looks very nice to me. Actually, my first thought was "and again a shitty hair shader...". Then i saw, that the hair is actually alpha mapped. Nice work!

And, the proportions are ok IMHO. Or, you never saw a east european or a asian?

Wfr, Sindwiller

If your initial reaction was that it was a "shitty" shader, why did you suddenly think it was good looking just because it was modeled? :wink:

Because those hair shaders arent very realistic but need relatively much performance.

Wfr, Sindwiller

[Xadeko]

little update

[tomdon]

His waist and lower torso are a bit thin compared to his chest and shoulders.

[Ginger Lord]

First model into source, a shitty 24 poly sign. Modelled in XSI, UV and texture by me.

Did I mention its a bit shit?